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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on November 23, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “I never want to hurt you, Candace, no one wants such thing to happened…”  Another punches on the stomach and face, Tina again flies to the other side of the room. “That is bullshit! She loved me from the beginning! Until you showed up!” “If so…” Tina struggles to sit up. “Tell me, Captain, did

    “I never want to hurt you, Candace, no one wants such thing to happened…” 

    Another punches on the stomach and face, Tina again flies to the other side of the room.

    “That is bullshit! She loved me from the beginning! Until you showed up!”

    “If so…” Tina struggles to sit up. “Tell me, Captain, did she ever say the word to you? Did she ever tell you that she loved you?”

    The words stuck in Candace’s mouth. No, she can’t remember any moment when Bette said the ‘L’ word, no, not once.

    Tina nods, she knew the answer already. “You bet.” 

    The Captain is blinded by anger and emotions, she grabs Tina’s collar and pulls her up from the floor, like throwing away a puppet, Tina is never her opponent, Candace is so much stronger than her. 

    A punch after a punch, the captain pours her entire anger at the blonde woman, the betray of her lover, the extreme order of her mother, cannot asserting by her will…everything, she let it out on this woman who has stolen her lover. 

    As for Tina…she silently endures every hit Candace gives, knowing there is no way she can win the Captain, she remains silent. If she’s lucky enough she will get through this…And if she’s not…She hopes that Bette and Noah will forgive her for the absence in their lives.

    Blood is filling her lungs, Candace shows no mercy, every hit is direct and lethal, her fists lay on the weak spot of the blonde, letting off the anger and the hate she’s been holding for so long.

    The Captain is panting, but she doesn’t stop, again and again, when she sees Tina Kennard is still coughing or breathing, she hits punch her again…Why does this woman she hates so much couldn’t die sooner?

    Feeling tired by the exercise, Candace has had enough.

    It’s time to take action…Her mother’s word coming up her mind. 

    Since Candace was a little girl, she never received any love, her father abandoned them, her mother basically ignored her after knowing she’s a lesbian. She’s being so lonely for years, worked so hard on her study so as to win other’s approval, to be a police officer, because, with that, no one can look down on her and ignore her again. 

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    1. Hi CJ:

      Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.

      Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.

      Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.

      Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.

      CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.

      Thanks CJ the story is amazing.

      P

    2. Hi CJ,

      Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!

      Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.

      Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.

      I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.

      But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.

      Again, a fantastic story!!!

    3. Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.

      Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.

      Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.

      You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?

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