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The Most Distant Course
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And there’s a gun in Candace’s hand, the muzzle points at the woman on the ground…her fiance, her Tina.
Candace’s finger is tugging on the trigger, ready to fire any second, the blonde lays on the ground, noticing her fate, can’t do anything but watch her time is ticking.
Bette sees the love of her life slowly close her eyes.
“Oh, my god…No!”
With a loud bang, Bette’s eyes grow big.
Everything like going on with the slow motion, James suddenly appears in the room from nowhere, at the same time when the gun fired, he grabs Candace Jewell’s hand and forces her to change the direction, with one skillful hit, the weapon is now taken away by the man. With another hit on the head, the Captain falls on the ground.
As if coming back to reality, Bette finds herself standing in the room, her knees fall down onto the ground.
“Tina! Tina!”
Bette immediately carries up the body of the blonde, who’s now crawling on the ground, wounds, and blood everywhere.
The bullet went right through Tina’s shoulder, red liquids pour out like the waterfall, the gunshot hole is horrifying, the hitting and punching wounds suddenly become not serious at all.
“Jesus…Tina…I need help here! Somebody call the ambulance!” Bette cries out.
“Right away.” James immediately leaves the room.
“Bette…”
A small voice comes up, even it’s so soft that anyone can barely hear, but the detective is familiar with that voice.
“T…” Bette looks at Tina, the blonde’s lips are quivering as if she’s trying to say anything. “Don’t worry…don’t worry baby, I will take you to the hospital, the ambulance will arrive very soon, hang in there, baby, hang in there…”
“Bette…” Tina says while her swelling eyes can hardly open.
“Yes, T, I’m right here, T, I’m right here…”
“Noah…”
“He’s safe, he’s safe with Kit…”
“Carmen…and…”
“They are both fine, don’t worry, alright? Don’t worry…”
“Stay…”
“I’m not going anywhere, baby, I’m not going anywhere…”
A weak smile appears on her mouth, her lips quiver again, but no sound coming out, Tina slowly closes her eyes.
“No, no, no, no, no…Tina? Tina!”
“Call the fucking ambulance now!”
The way on the hospital is not smooth, people in the ambulance are wallowing in the swell, the rough traffic makes the vehicle turn side to side all the way.
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.
Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.
Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.
Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.
CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.
Thanks CJ the story is amazing.
P
Hi CJ,
Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!
Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.
Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.
I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.
But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.
Again, a fantastic story!!!
Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.
Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.
Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.
You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?
What a great Chapter!
So many answers but I need you to post again really, really quickly on Tina’s Condition.
Please, please it is cruel to leave us hanging!
Post soon, real soon! Please!
SG