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    The Most Distant Course

    “No, I mean… a real mother.”

    I know what she means, a mother that needs to bring up a baby. Unlike Noah, he’s already a mature kid when he’s met Bette, but the child in my body, he or she who’s waiting for a brand new life, will require a real mother to teach the lessons of life.

    “Bette…” I reached out, cups her face in my hand. “Look at me, baby.”

    She turns her face at me, astonishing brown pupils look at me with tears threatening to fall. The detective has been through a lot, gunfights, robbery, and even being a spy, torn down the most dangerous criminal organization of all time…and now she’s afraid of being a mother for a child who only appeared on this planet since two months ago.

    “You are going to be alright, baby, you have proved that you can be a great mother when you were with Noah, he loves you, respects you and regards you as his other mother. Therefore, you don’t have to worried about anything, and don’t think you’re not qualified for being a mother for a baby, because you are already a very responsible mama.”

    Bette sniffed, also swallowed back her tears.

    “Really?”

    “Yes, baby, now, get back your proud confidence and have a great morning breakfast with me, or your son soon to be will not be happy about the empty stomach and will start to mess with his mama.”

    “I want a daughter.” Bette pouted.

    I rolled my eyes. “Fine, ‘she’, happy now?”

    “Yep.” 

    Jesus, sometimes Bette was like a big baby.

    Before I could say anything, a small knock on the door made both of us turn our heads.

    “Mama T? Are you awake?”

    I shot Bette a jokingly glance, a big smirk appeared on my face.

    “What did you do now?”

    “Wha…I did nothing!”

    “Then how come our some called my name instead of yours?”

    The knocking sound continued.

    “Mama, mama, open the door, I’m hungry, and mama B burned the stove and now I can’t make my breakfast.”

    Bette’s face instantly flushed red, her eyes blinked several times, clearly wouldn’t believe her son just betrayed her to his other mother. God, that was so cute.

    “Damn, I know that kid is always on your side,” Bette muttered.

    Comments

    1. Bibi28 says

      Hi CJ,

      What a incredible good chapter!

      At first i thought you skipped the part about Tina’s life in danger and moved fast forward to their future. And oh what a beautiful dream Tina had when she was fighting for her life. That is certainly a part i want to read more about! The interaction and pouting between Bette & Tina and Noah warmed my heart and made me laugh!

      It was a well calculated risk Tina took, but at the end she is the absolute winner!!!

      I hope to read what happened with Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornblunth and of course what happened with Candace.

      I am a little sad that there will be only three chapters more on this incredible story!

      Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent as writer and this story!

    2. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      Great chapter, that was very sweet, like Bibi, I thought that you skipped a whole chapter but then I realized about the wonderful dream of Tina.

      Yes, it was hard but Tima made it, now we want to learn what happened with the evil people what about Buckley, Aaron, Candace.

      I would like to see how the legal situation of Tina will be fixed.

      And of course the happy ending.

      Wonderful story, my friend.

      Thanks and pps.

      P

    3. Martha3128 says

      Love it…after three weeks some of Tina’s superficial wounds and bruises should have healed. The deep wounds and the broken bones probably will take a lot longer. And considering her fragile health, its a wonder she survived at all. Bette needs to heal also. Can’t wait to hear about Faye Buckley, Aaron Kornbluth, and Candace Newell. Oh and what really happened to Shane? Did Max really kill her? Surely not! Is Tina now really in the clear – free to live her life as a normal person? What will happen to Bette and her job? Maybe she will leave law enforcement and do something else? I really hope the Cooper Family chapter is now truly closed.

      This is a good story….I want Tina and Bette to make a home and life together. Thankyou for the update.

    4. SassyGran says

      Great Chapter!

      You had me a bit at sea to start with but glad I persevered!

      Mixed feelings about the story ending but really looking forward to your next post.

      You are a talented storyteller, thanks for posting.

      SG

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