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The Most Distant Course
I would never forget this scene. After she knocked down three boys, she unhurriedly picked up her bag and walked to her car, before she sat in the driver seat, she saw us, on the roof.
Her shy, afraid hazel eyes were gone, replaced by the stone, hatred green eyes. She looked straight at us, eyes to eyes, all four of us gulped at her stare.
“The eyes,” If I needed to describe. “Her eyes were cold as ice.”
Adele’s popcorn box was squeezed into a ball, furious about Tina Kennard beat her again. Oh, I was astonished, laughing so hard in my mind, Adele’s face was hilarious, almost blew out the smoke as the train. I felt happy for Tina but also feeling worried for her, her creepy, crazy surviving skills was not helping…well, technically it was, but only for a short period, she’s challenging Adele, no one end up well when they challenged her.
Just like I guessed, Adele would get her back for this.
The day after, five more people were waiting for her, then six, then eight, some even grabbed a knife as a weapon. Just like you can guess, Tina Kennard was really good, never gave up, never showed her weakness, fighting like a warrior, even if there were so many people. If she got hurt, she hurt back harder, regardless of any wounds and pain, she won battles to battles all by herself. I was there, witness everything the entire time.
A week has passed, Finally, Adele gave up, because all her followers are too afraid to confront Tina face to face. After all these messes, Tina only got some bruises and cuts on her face and hands, the next day she will show up in class with several bandages on her, as nothing happened, reading her book, ignoring everyone. Some teachers asked, she would tell them she falls from the stair.
Simple methods are useless, Adele finally pulled me out to fight.
I seldom go into action personally, maybe twice or thrice, I couldn’t remember the actual number.
The first time I started to be manipulated by her was probably four or five years ago. There was a boy, Adele liked him so much, she wanted me made up a plan to kick away his girlfriend and made him become hers’.
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Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the new chapter!
What competition? Did you win?
Ok, when i read this update – i’ll comment about it
Zhenya says
Ok, when Bette wrote in her journal – “my pride beat my feeling” – she’s liying by herself. It’s no pride, it’s fear.
This Bette needs to start grow her own backbone, because for now she hasn’t any. She’s just Adele’s pet.
And her participation in girl’s suicide – it’s not only awful, but criminal case in some countries.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
It’s a World Rescue Swimming Competiton. I did well, Thanks for asking.
Indeed, Bette has no idea she’s been manipulating, when she had fame, money, and everything, Slowly she lost herself, abandon all her Principle and conscience, this was sad but normal. She got benefits from Adele which she knew that she needs to pay back. The sadder part is that even if she wants to get out, the circumstance won’t allow her to.
Zhenya says
I must say most disturbing part was that Bette just stayed and saw and do nothing when some punks try phisical hurt Tina. And it was multiplay times. And don’t know how Tina can ever forgive her after that.
proteonomics says
Hi CJ,
Hope you had a good time competing in Australia, I saw the nice pictures.
Great chapter, what Bette wrote in her diary explains her attitude and her position in Adele’s circle.
I like that you are touching the bully issue; everywhere re bullies and they like to surround themselves of “useful idiots” it is like a rotten apple trying to contaminate the others, and most of the times they succeed.
What Adele forced Bette to make to the other girl, was cruel, but as you don’t give details about that, I guess, it was more like Bette did something to the couple to break them apart; what Bette never thought was that the girl could kill herself; that is something that she will have to carry with her the rest of her lifetime.
Those things still happen especially among children out of control and guide, and unfortunately sometimes among adults.
Kids sometimes can’t measure the extent of their actions, but adults can and still they do it, and that has to be prevented and punished.
What is interesting is how Bette realizes the attraction she is feeling for Tina; apparently, she knows she doesn’t like boys, and even though she thinks she is not a lesbian, she has all the characteristics and she is falling for Tina, she even is jealous of Shane.
How interesting you mentioned that Kelly is lesbian and out of the closet, am I wrong?
And why Kelly would kill Tina if she learns Bette likes Tina? Is Kelly wooing Bette, is Kelly her “almost-girlfriend”?
Wow, so many questions in my mind, looking for answers.
Thanks for the chapter; I’ll be waiting for the update.
P
Crystal J.H says
Hi, proteonomics:
Thank you very much for your caring, really warms my heart when there are people really care about the story.
Actually, Bette didn’t do something really that awful, just spread the rumors, fake pictures, and gossips that will destroy the girls’ reputation. I didn’t write it cause it’s Bette’s vision to write it, she certainly didn’t want to discuss the details. And certainly, some tricks or verbal abuse might be fun for those bullies, they are just having fun but they don’t know they already cause a big trauma for the victims.
I think Bette likes Tina after she witnessed Tina’s personalities. Tina never bow to the bullies, she fought bravely to the end, she’s the opposite side of Bette, the side that Bette wants to be like. Bette hated the group, but she can’t help because she’s afraid of Adele, but Tina wasn’t. Any threat, blackmail or pain won’t let her give up her belief. That’s what Bette admired Tina the most, and the more she saw how brave Tina was, the more admire grows. Slowly then she realized she likes the blonde.
Well, Kelly loves Bette, a lot, so she tried every different way to shut Bette’s admirer out. If those people didn’t be stopped by Kelly, Bette probably has lots of relationships now. So if Kelly knows that Bette actually doesn’t like her but Tina, she will definitely do some bad things to her.
I hope I answered your questions, this was my first time writing, so thank you for comments, I’ll try very hard to improve my next chapter!
SassyGran says
Thanks for posting.
Look forward to more soon.
Looking forward to the back story of Bette.
SG
Crystal J.H says
Hi SassyGran:
Thank you for your reply,
next chapter will be updated next Saturday!
Bibi28 says
I loved to read about Bette and why she is acting the way she is.
But she needs to cut ties with Adele and stand up to her before she is going to be taken down with her.
Adele is one sick horrible kid, she needs to be slapped back.
I admire Tina, she is a strong kid.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Crystal J.H says
Hi, Bibi28:
Thank you for your comments!
And thanks to you that you are always here to support the story.
I will post the chapter very soon!