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The Most Distant Course

I have to defend myself, I was not as bad as you thought, and of course, I didn’t like Adele’s personality nor her actions. To be straightforward, I don’t like her at all. I wouldn’t absolve the responsibility for what I have done, what I did was bad, but I have no choice.
My family was poor when we moved into this town, bankrupt, thanks for my father, Melvin Porter. I remember those days, my materialism father frustrated all our property and being charged, he took me, moving away from Chicago in to this town, penniless, he just started his lawyer business in this town, he knew no one and didn’t have many customers. He deserved it, since he ruined his reputation when he cheated on my mother years ago.
Adele made a deal I couldn’t refuse, she told me if I could handle this boy she liked, she’ll ask her father to introduce some people to my father. For a head of the police, there were plenty of people asking for a lawyer to file a lawsuit. This was a great opportunity for my father, I have no choice to agree with her.
That boy wasn’t really clever, so it didn’t take me long to get rid of that girl. After he dumped her, I thought I will feel proud about it, you know, brilliant enough to control people’s relationship, using tricks to play other’s feeling. It was fun at first, my reputation rising from the bottom to top, standing side by side with the famous group, helping the most famous girl with the most power in town, I felt so proud and complacent, walking in the school like a celebrity, get everyone’s vision of worship…
This feeling continued for a whole week, then I saw the girl I messed up with.
After the boy breaking up with her, the optimism girl had changed, her face was no longer happy and smiling, instead, she showed hurt, broke, unbelievable, the face that showed her heart crumble into nothing. I didn’t know I was totally wrong when I just saw her, what made me unable to escape the full guiltiness was what I heard from Alice.
The girl killed herself by cutting her wrist, after the boy breaking up with her two weeks later. her single father found her in the bathtub and immediately brought her to the hospital, but she didn’t make it, she lost too much blood. The boy did ask Adele to be her girlfriend, ironically, their relationship couldn’t last for a month.
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Hi, thanks for the new chapter!
What competition? Did you win?
Ok, when i read this update – i’ll comment about it
Ok, when Bette wrote in her journal – “my pride beat my feeling” – she’s liying by herself. It’s no pride, it’s fear.
This Bette needs to start grow her own backbone, because for now she hasn’t any. She’s just Adele’s pet.
And her participation in girl’s suicide – it’s not only awful, but criminal case in some countries.
Hi Zhenya:
It’s a World Rescue Swimming Competiton. I did well, Thanks for asking.
Indeed, Bette has no idea she’s been manipulating, when she had fame, money, and everything, Slowly she lost herself, abandon all her Principle and conscience, this was sad but normal. She got benefits from Adele which she knew that she needs to pay back. The sadder part is that even if she wants to get out, the circumstance won’t allow her to.
I must say most disturbing part was that Bette just stayed and saw and do nothing when some punks try phisical hurt Tina. And it was multiplay times. And don’t know how Tina can ever forgive her after that.
Hi CJ,
Hope you had a good time competing in Australia, I saw the nice pictures.
Great chapter, what Bette wrote in her diary explains her attitude and her position in Adele’s circle.
I like that you are touching the bully issue; everywhere re bullies and they like to surround themselves of “useful idiots” it is like a rotten apple trying to contaminate the others, and most of the times they succeed.
What Adele forced Bette to make to the other girl, was cruel, but as you don’t give details about that, I guess, it was more like Bette did something to the couple to break them apart; what Bette never thought was that the girl could kill herself; that is something that she will have to carry with her the rest of her lifetime.
Those things still happen especially among children out of control and guide, and unfortunately sometimes among adults.
Kids sometimes can’t measure the extent of their actions, but adults can and still they do it, and that has to be prevented and punished.
What is interesting is how Bette realizes the attraction she is feeling for Tina; apparently, she knows she doesn’t like boys, and even though she thinks she is not a lesbian, she has all the characteristics and she is falling for Tina, she even is jealous of Shane.
How interesting you mentioned that Kelly is lesbian and out of the closet, am I wrong?
And why Kelly would kill Tina if she learns Bette likes Tina? Is Kelly wooing Bette, is Kelly her “almost-girlfriend”?
Wow, so many questions in my mind, looking for answers.
Thanks for the chapter; I’ll be waiting for the update.
P
Hi, proteonomics:
Thank you very much for your caring, really warms my heart when there are people really care about the story.
Actually, Bette didn’t do something really that awful, just spread the rumors, fake pictures, and gossips that will destroy the girls’ reputation. I didn’t write it cause it’s Bette’s vision to write it, she certainly didn’t want to discuss the details. And certainly, some tricks or verbal abuse might be fun for those bullies, they are just having fun but they don’t know they already cause a big trauma for the victims.
I think Bette likes Tina after she witnessed Tina’s personalities. Tina never bow to the bullies, she fought bravely to the end, she’s the opposite side of Bette, the side that Bette wants to be like. Bette hated the group, but she can’t help because she’s afraid of Adele, but Tina wasn’t. Any threat, blackmail or pain won’t let her give up her belief. That’s what Bette admired Tina the most, and the more she saw how brave Tina was, the more admire grows. Slowly then she realized she likes the blonde.
Well, Kelly loves Bette, a lot, so she tried every different way to shut Bette’s admirer out. If those people didn’t be stopped by Kelly, Bette probably has lots of relationships now. So if Kelly knows that Bette actually doesn’t like her but Tina, she will definitely do some bad things to her.
I hope I answered your questions, this was my first time writing, so thank you for comments, I’ll try very hard to improve my next chapter!
Thanks for posting.
Look forward to more soon.
Looking forward to the back story of Bette.
SG
Hi SassyGran:
Thank you for your reply,
next chapter will be updated next Saturday!
I loved to read about Bette and why she is acting the way she is.
But she needs to cut ties with Adele and stand up to her before she is going to be taken down with her.
Adele is one sick horrible kid, she needs to be slapped back.
I admire Tina, she is a strong kid.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hi, Bibi28:
Thank you for your comments!
And thanks to you that you are always here to support the story.
I will post the chapter very soon!