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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on November 30, 2018 by Crystal J.H.
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    Adele’s order gave me a great opportunity to investigate Tina Kennard. Before I met her, I thought myself that I can see through a lot of people, even Alice called me a detective, I believed that through my observation, every people can be read. So I’ve been watching her every day, long distance, short distance,

    Adele’s order gave me a great opportunity to investigate Tina Kennard. Before I met her, I thought myself that I can see through a lot of people, even Alice called me a detective, I believed that through my observation, every people can be read. So I’ve been watching her every day, long distance, short distance, far away, from the roof top to the bottom, I tried to understand this secret blonde, but for her, I see nothing.

    Using my word, she’s Monalisa. Clear like a drawing but unreadable, no one knows where she came from, her background, her stories, her every decision was straight and clear, no extra move, straight to the point when she’s talking, the most unfathomable girl I have ever met.

    I’ve talked to her so not many times, although she stood so close to me, she seems so far away, like facing the most distant person, very hard to reach or approach.

    It’s true that she sat and ruined my favorite books…some are still stuck on the classroom floor, but above all the things she did, which I can’t blame her, I found that…I kind of like her.

    God, I don’t know what I’m saying, I mean…I’m not a lesbian, so far…True, there were lots of girls confessed to me, and true, after slept with my ex-boyfriend Coleman, I felt totally wrong about the boyfriend things. Maybe it’s not fair for him, but compared him to Tina, he was not so clever…fine, stupid, I must say.

    It’s not like I prefer someone smarter, Tina is…how can I describe her? A girl that can melt my heart for only a smile, too bad I have never seen her genuine smile before, a small beam was all she has, I believe if she smiles genuinely, she will make me faint without a second.

    And her voice…god, she has the sweetest voice than anyone else, even when she’s angry. There were only 3 times when I hear her chuckle. First was when she’s reading a book in the class, not too loud but I heard it. Next time was she chatting with some classmates in the hallway, I didn’t hear what they were talking about but I keen to know it. The last time was when she saw a girl rolling her eyes to a teacher, I think I can get used to listening to her voice every day even my heart was a bit jealous to Sam, the poor girl Adele asked her to buy the coffee…fine, I was really jealous for Saml, the comfortable high pitch when she chuckled, made my heart melt every single time.

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    2. Ok, when Bette wrote in her journal – “my pride beat my feeling” – she’s liying by herself. It’s no pride, it’s fear.
      This Bette needs to start grow her own backbone, because for now she hasn’t any. She’s just Adele’s pet.
      And her participation in girl’s suicide – it’s not only awful, but criminal case in some countries.

      • Hi Zhenya:

        It’s a World Rescue Swimming Competiton. I did well, Thanks for asking.

        Indeed, Bette has no idea she’s been manipulating, when she had fame, money, and everything, Slowly she lost herself, abandon all her Principle and conscience, this was sad but normal. She got benefits from Adele which she knew that she needs to pay back. The sadder part is that even if she wants to get out, the circumstance won’t allow her to.
         

        • I must say most disturbing part was that Bette just stayed and saw and do nothing when some punks try phisical hurt Tina. And it was multiplay times. And don’t know how Tina can ever forgive her after that.

    3. Hi CJ,
      Hope you had a good time competing in Australia, I saw the nice pictures.

      Great chapter, what Bette wrote in her diary explains her attitude and her position in Adele’s circle.

      I like that you are touching the bully issue; everywhere re bullies and they like to surround themselves of “useful idiots” it is like a rotten apple trying to contaminate the others, and most of the times they succeed.
      What Adele forced Bette to make to the other girl, was cruel, but as you don’t give details about that, I guess, it was more like Bette did something to the couple to break them apart; what Bette never thought was that the girl could kill herself; that is something that she will have to carry with her the rest of her lifetime.
      Those things still happen especially among children out of control and guide, and unfortunately sometimes among adults.

      Kids sometimes can’t measure the extent of their actions, but adults can and still they do it, and that has to be prevented and punished.

      What is interesting is how Bette realizes the attraction she is feeling for Tina; apparently, she knows she doesn’t like boys, and even though she thinks she is not a lesbian, she has all the characteristics and she is falling for Tina, she even is jealous of Shane.

      How interesting you mentioned that Kelly is lesbian and out of the closet, am I wrong?

      And why Kelly would kill Tina if she learns Bette likes Tina? Is Kelly wooing Bette, is Kelly her “almost-girlfriend”?

      Wow, so many questions in my mind, looking for answers.

      Thanks for the chapter; I’ll be waiting for the update.

      P

      • Hi, proteonomics:

        Thank you very much for your caring, really warms my heart when there are people really care about the story.

        Actually, Bette didn’t do something really that awful, just spread the rumors, fake pictures, and gossips that will destroy the girls’ reputation. I didn’t write it cause it’s Bette’s vision to write it, she certainly didn’t want to discuss the details. And certainly, some tricks or verbal abuse might be fun for those bullies, they are just having fun but they don’t know they already cause a big trauma for the victims.

        I think Bette likes Tina after she witnessed Tina’s personalities. Tina never bow to the bullies, she fought bravely to the end, she’s the opposite side of Bette, the side that Bette wants to be like. Bette hated the group, but she can’t help because she’s afraid of Adele, but Tina wasn’t. Any threat, blackmail or pain won’t let her give up her belief. That’s what Bette admired Tina the most, and the more she saw how brave Tina was, the more admire grows. Slowly then she realized she likes the blonde.
         
        Well, Kelly loves Bette, a lot, so she tried every different way to shut Bette’s admirer out. If those people didn’t be stopped by Kelly, Bette probably has lots of relationships now. So if Kelly knows that Bette actually doesn’t like her but Tina, she will definitely do some bad things to her.

        I hope I answered your questions, this was my first time writing, so thank you for comments, I’ll try very hard to improve my next chapter!

    5. I loved to read about Bette and why she is acting the way she is.

      But she needs to cut ties with Adele and stand up to her before she is going to be taken down with her.

      Adele is one sick horrible kid, she needs to be slapped back.

      I admire Tina, she is a strong kid.

      Looking forward to the next chapter!

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