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The Most Distant Course
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“I sorry, I’m just…it’s just very funny.”
“I don’t see where’s the funny point.” Bette says quietly.
“Look, it’s not I don’t see your point seriously, it’s just…you’re really interesting, sitting right here alone, all you can think about was how I feel about the school?”
Bette stunned for a while, tingling for what Tina just said.
Yep, a serious question at an interesting location, and the timing was also funny, Tina deserves to laugh. Bette’s bad mood quickly disappear after Tina’s explanation, now even Bette herself wants to laugh also, but she’s too busy watching Tina smile. This is the genuine smile she wanted to see so much, pure innocent and beautiful, she stares at Tina, cannot take her eyes off her.
“I’m sorry…” Tina tries so hard to stop laughing, she looks at the brunette next to her, suddenly realizes she was being gazed for a long while.
“Are you checking on me, Miss Porter?” Tina teases.
Bette blushes, waves her hand to hide her embarrassment. “Pfft, don’t be so cocky.”
“With the mighty Bette Porter sitting right beside me and talking to me? Oh, trust me, I am.” Tina says sarcastically.
“Why thank you, Miss Kennard, for looking so highly on me, I’m flattered.”
“Thought you already get used to these kinds of compliment.”
“These kinds of compliment will never be used to, especially from the smart girl like Tina Kennard, I keen to hear more.” Bette makes a bowing gesture. “So please, go on.”
Tina smirks. “Really? Speaking of a smart girl, who was the one the whole school called Sherlock Girl?”
Bette opens her mouth. “Sher…Where did you hear that?”
Tina smile triumphally.
“Your best friend Miss Alice Pieszecki?”
Damn you, Alice!
Bette gulps, she was already feeling shame about the stupid name Alice called her, but what makes she feel more embarrassing is that the smartest girl in the school heard about it. It was like being a snob in front of a true expert.
“Well, if you heard from her, this information was a hundred percent untrustworthy and absurd.”
“Huh? So teachers just love you for no reason? Nice job, Bette Porter, nice job.”
“Hey, it’s not my fault being so popular.”
“Now who’s the cocky one?” Tina makes a handsome smile, Bette scratches her head, now her face is red as an apple.
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Very nice Post but not long enough :-)
Like these two characters and look forward to more.
Thanks for posting
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I will try very hard to write more, but sometimes English really is so different than Chinese XD
Thank you for your comment!
No worries. Your English has to be better than my Chinese! I’m just being selfish!
Thanks for your posts I enjoy them.
SG
Hi, thanks for update!
Ok, i’m ready to comment
I still don’t like this Bette and think Tina too good for her. Because when Tina saw the one, who harrased her a few month more natural reacton can be – just leave or stop and maybe beat this reach snob until she beg for mercy.
So i think Bette need done a lot more groveling until Tina can forgive her
Waiting for the next update!
Hi Zhenya:
I understand your feeling, the reason that Tina will act so kindly will be explained in the next chapter, Tina will give out a full explanation so don’t worry.
I agree with you, but sometimes forgiveness is bigger than anything, this is what I have seen in The L word. This amazing couple fight so hard for other, if it were not for the forgiveness, they won’t able to be together.
Thank you for your comment!
Ok, i’ll be waiting for Tina’a explanation than. Thanks!
Tina coming to the rescue of Bette!!! I admire Tina, she is one incredible young woman!!!
It is great to see Bette as a vulnerable young girl and she should’nt deserve Tina’s kindness, but she is a victim too. School can be a real hard time and you lose sometimes a little bit of your true personality, just to be part of the popular gang instead to be a loser, especialy when you are blackmailed like Bette by Adele. It is sad but it happens everywhere, in every highschool.
But i really believe Bette is a kind and loving person deap in her heart. And Tina is the girl who will bring that to light.
I loved the update, thank you!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Exactly, Bette might be bad before but she was forced to be a bully. Thanks to Tina, she finally realized that someone needed to stand up against Adele, I know that although some student joined the bullies, they just wanted to protect themselves from being hurt, it’s not a nice idea but the most useful one.
I reckon that they both bring light to each other. Tina helped Bette find herself, and Bette helped Tina…well that’s on the next chapter XD
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for liking this story.
Hi CJ:
This is a very nice chapter now it’s Bette who is feeling bad for all her wrongdoing, as she said, it is like karma.
Tina is very nice and caring for her, of course, she has a crush on Bette.
How docilely Bette allowed herself to, almost, be caressed by Tina; Bette has a long way to go, to redeem herself about all her past actions in the golden circle, her growing up, is triggered by her infatuation for Tina.
I like this story very much. Thank you, I’ll be waiting for your update.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Me either, I like the changing Bette. Maybe it was the “Aura” Tina gave to Bette made her willing to believe her. IN our life there are always some people we don’t really know them but we trust them instantly, not wholeheartedly but at least we believe what they say. This was how Bette feel about Tina, she acted herself in front of anyone. Hope you know what I am talking about. XD
Thank you for your comment and for liking this story!
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