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    The Power of Good-bye

    Story written on November 5, 2013 by Bette0Porter.
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    “The spell has been broken, I loved you so”

                I spent the most beautiful seven years of my life with her. Then things changed; I don’t know how but they did. And I admit it, it has been mainly my fault. I accepted a new job position, the one at the CAC and everything started to crash. I took her for granted. And she slowly became my shadow. She was Bette’s Tina. And she didn’t deserve this. But I was too proud to admit it to her… so I kept acting like a fucking selfish asshole. I started to work late at work. I practically kept forgetting about important dates, such as our anniversary. For seven years I have been her fortress. She blindly leaned on me… but in the last period I failed her. I wasn’t there when she learnt about the miscarriage – our baby boy. I wasn’t there because I was too busy with that fucking show. I was falling and I didn’t want to admit it, so I pretended to be strong and it didn’t do anything but get things worse. That’s when I made the biggest mistake of my life: Candace. I was so ashamed of myself for hurting Tina for some meaningless sex. And when she hidden the second pregnancy from me I was completely sure she hated me. Instead, she did it because she wanted to protect me. She didn’t know if I could stand another miscarriage… she did it for me, she once again acted like the unselfish sweet woman she’s ever been and she made me her priority. And how did I repay her? Cheating on her.

                But I wasn’t going to give up, I wanted her to forgive me and I did anything I could. I also gave her all the cards. She was the one who was going to decide when to come back, whether she wanted it or not. I was willing to wait for her. I did wait and when she decided she wanted to give birth in our home I felt like I could move a whole mountain. When Angelica was born I was on cloud nine. After Tina’s recovery I was starting to think that maybe things weren’t too awful as they looked and that we could make it work but then… I failed her again. I lost the job and we were having financial issues and I couldn’t find a job that matched my wishes. I felt so useless. I was falling down right before her. And now… I, Bette Porter, the one who’s always been her support, am not able to give her security anymore.

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    1. Wow you wrote such a wonderful and beautiful story here. It is in a very sad way though. I would very like to see more of it. Please post more.

      • I’m glad you liked it. As I already said, I was thinking(and I’m pretty sure I will) about writing a sequel, but I’m working on something else at the moment.
        I won’t forget about this one, though. Thank you!

    2. Painful, beautiful just totally amazing writing. You have the talent to make us feel Bette’s anguish through your extraordinary writing. It requires a sequel.

    3. hey, dear! So, you do not you write it to the end of this story for that: “to be continued.” This was one of my favorites, what you wrote, and I was hoping it turns out that was Bette hallucinating or was the reality she saw?
      but I understand you.
      as I was once told, this is amazing story, with its painful way.
      please continue soon :-)

    4. It was so painful to read, how ever you did write it so good. I could really feel the pain Bette is feeling.

      I hope you will write the sequel.

      Call it weird, but i read this one more than once, before i decided to leave a comment.

      I know somebody who wanted to commit suïcide, so for me it’s hard to read.

      But like i already said, it’s beautiful written.

    5. Just read this again and it’s still so painful, but written so very well. Please don’t let this be the end of Bette….write a sequel. :)

    6. I always felt that was Bette problem, she love Tina more than she love herself and that’s not good. Tina treated bette horribly even though she cheated on her but with everything Tina did nobody deserves that kind of pain especially if that person is already broken…smh so sad

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