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    The Power of Good-bye

    Story written on November 5, 2013 by Bette0Porter.
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    “The spell has been broken, I loved you so”

    I got up from the couch and slowly enter the bedroom; I still feel sick at the thought of it but I manage to remain there. And there she is, my little angel sleeping in her crib. She looks so peaceful. I look at her for I don’t know how long. She gives me the peace I once felt when I looked at Tina in the morning, or after making love. The most beautiful sensation ever. “How did things get so fucked up?” I sigh.

    “I wish I knew” Tina answers the question I didn’t realize I uttered out loud. She still has that blank expression on her face that make me understand that she doesn’t give a damn anymore. The Tina that was once full of love and kindness wasn’t there with me. I wonder why she’s keeping following me since she doesn’t mind me going away. Maybe she’s scared of leaving me alone with Angie… God, what the hell am I thinking? I’m losing my mind, of course she’s not scared of leaving me alone with her; she’s my daughter too, right?

    “I need to pack” I whisper.

    “Where will you go?” she isn’t stopping me. How I wish she did.

    “I don’t know… Kit’s maybe” I tell her, still looking at my angel. Our. That’s the only thing left between us.

    She doesn’t say anything else. As a matter of fact she just leaves the room. I can’t help but be even more convinced that it is really and completely over. She doesn’t need to lean on me anymore; she doesn’t want me anymore.

    I was her fortress she had to burn, because I can’t give her protection.


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    Chapter

    Pain is a warning that something’s wrong

                I just finished packing my bags and I still can’t believe I’m doing this. I am leaving my own house because it doesn’t feel like home anymore. I slowly walk across the hall and put the bags down, right in front of the door. Just a couple of hours and I will be out of here… and I’m scared of the thought that I won’t come back here never again. I’d rather go right now, but I’d better go tomorrow, in the morning after calling Kit. I want to make sure it’s okay with her. I don’t like the idea of going there without warning her first.

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    1. Wow you wrote such a wonderful and beautiful story here. It is in a very sad way though. I would very like to see more of it. Please post more.

      • I’m glad you liked it. As I already said, I was thinking(and I’m pretty sure I will) about writing a sequel, but I’m working on something else at the moment.
        I won’t forget about this one, though. Thank you!

    2. Painful, beautiful just totally amazing writing. You have the talent to make us feel Bette’s anguish through your extraordinary writing. It requires a sequel.

    3. hey, dear! So, you do not you write it to the end of this story for that: “to be continued.” This was one of my favorites, what you wrote, and I was hoping it turns out that was Bette hallucinating or was the reality she saw?
      but I understand you.
      as I was once told, this is amazing story, with its painful way.
      please continue soon :-)

    4. It was so painful to read, how ever you did write it so good. I could really feel the pain Bette is feeling.

      I hope you will write the sequel.

      Call it weird, but i read this one more than once, before i decided to leave a comment.

      I know somebody who wanted to commit suïcide, so for me it’s hard to read.

      But like i already said, it’s beautiful written.

    5. Just read this again and it’s still so painful, but written so very well. Please don’t let this be the end of Bette….write a sequel. :)

    6. I always felt that was Bette problem, she love Tina more than she love herself and that’s not good. Tina treated bette horribly even though she cheated on her but with everything Tina did nobody deserves that kind of pain especially if that person is already broken…smh so sad

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