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    The Power of Good-bye

    Story written on November 5, 2013 by Bette0Porter.
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    “The spell has been broken, I loved you so”

                It’s almost 2 a.m. and neither of us seem to bother to change into something more comfortable for the night. I am still wearing my power suit pants and a shirt. It’s not a big deal though, I wouldn’t sleep anyhow. I make my return to the living room and sit again on the couch. It seems to be my new routine by now. I let my whole body collapse on it. I throw my head back, letting it lean on the armrest. I rest one of my forearms against my forehead and stay like this for a while. It’s raining outside… the falling drops are the exact match of what my soul is doing; I feel like I’m losing my lifeblood, drop by drop. Then, again, I feel her presence. She’s here with me again. She looks like a fucking hawk. It’s unnerving; despite the fact that I would give anything to be with her, I just can’t bare the fact that she isn’t showing any kind of compassion for what she’s done to me. Maybe she’s just checking that I will really go away so she will be finally able to take him here, whenever she wants. I slowly move away my arm from my forehead and look at her. I’m almost sure I saw a slight twinkle in her eyes, but then it quickly disappear… maybe my mind is fooling me. I sit up and I keep looking at her, asking her to say something without uttering a word.

                “It’s late, don’t you think you should sleep?” she says.

                “No, it’s okay… I’m not that sleepy” I say coldly. The silence falls above us once again.

                “Listen, I…” she stops and takes a deep breath “I don’t think this is fair” I guess she’s talking about my cold and stern attitude toward her.

    So I blurt out: “Nothing is fair, Tina” I say. It’s ironic, these are the same words she said to me a year ago and I can tell she remembers; I noticed her wince. It’s so sad… everything we say to each other it’s a constant reminder of our failures.

                “I can’t help how I feel right now, I didn’t mean it to happen this way” she says without emotion.

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    1. Wow you wrote such a wonderful and beautiful story here. It is in a very sad way though. I would very like to see more of it. Please post more.

      • I’m glad you liked it. As I already said, I was thinking(and I’m pretty sure I will) about writing a sequel, but I’m working on something else at the moment.
        I won’t forget about this one, though. Thank you!

    2. Painful, beautiful just totally amazing writing. You have the talent to make us feel Bette’s anguish through your extraordinary writing. It requires a sequel.

    3. hey, dear! So, you do not you write it to the end of this story for that: “to be continued.” This was one of my favorites, what you wrote, and I was hoping it turns out that was Bette hallucinating or was the reality she saw?
      but I understand you.
      as I was once told, this is amazing story, with its painful way.
      please continue soon :-)

    4. It was so painful to read, how ever you did write it so good. I could really feel the pain Bette is feeling.

      I hope you will write the sequel.

      Call it weird, but i read this one more than once, before i decided to leave a comment.

      I know somebody who wanted to commit suïcide, so for me it’s hard to read.

      But like i already said, it’s beautiful written.

    5. Just read this again and it’s still so painful, but written so very well. Please don’t let this be the end of Bette….write a sequel. :)

    6. I always felt that was Bette problem, she love Tina more than she love herself and that’s not good. Tina treated bette horribly even though she cheated on her but with everything Tina did nobody deserves that kind of pain especially if that person is already broken…smh so sad

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