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    The Power of Good-bye

    Story written on November 5, 2013 by Bette0Porter.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=83395
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    “The spell has been broken, I loved you so”

                There’s too much pain; the thing that once felt so right, feels so wrong right now.


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    Chapter

    There’s nothing left to try

                It’s still raining cats and dogs; as if the heaven knows what I am going through. It’s crying with me… It’s almost 6 a.m. and I spent the whole night sitting on the chair, in the living room. Silently enjoying the view of Tina sleeping. I’m cherishing it since I won’t be able to do it anymore. I didn’t sleep because I was scared of letting my eyes shut; I didn’t want to lose the chance to look at her – really look at her after a long time. I suddenly feel the urge to fight for her and make her understand that this isn’t really what I want. God I don’t want to go away from here… I wish I could easily erase all the bad things happened. I am also willing to let go of the things she did lately: the men; the continuous criticism; Josh Becker; daddyof2. Just because I love her. But something is telling me that she doesn’t believe in us anymore.

                After spending another hour looking at her, I hear some cooing coming from the bedroom. I smile; it’s my little baby. I get up and slowly head to the room. She’s fully awake, but she’s not crying. “Hello, boo”, I say to her. My voice is filled with love; the love I feel for her. I’ve never thought that someone this little could mean the world to me. I fell in love with her right in the moment she came out of Tina’s belly. Angelica… her name fits her so well. She’s my little angel. “Mommy loves you, you know? I am sorry things got so messed up, but you’ll learn – in the future, that grown-ups sometimes do very silly things. I wish I could go back in time and make things better for the three of us. The only thing that matters now is that I will always love you. You’ll be in my heart, no matter what happens, you will always be with me” I speak to her, but my voice is so weak it almost inaudible. A tear escapes my eye as I gently rub my thumb on her cheek. It took a couple of minutes for her to fall asleep again. I spend some other minutes watching her and trying to compose myself. I lightly sniff and then leave the room.

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    1. Wow you wrote such a wonderful and beautiful story here. It is in a very sad way though. I would very like to see more of it. Please post more.

      • I’m glad you liked it. As I already said, I was thinking(and I’m pretty sure I will) about writing a sequel, but I’m working on something else at the moment.
        I won’t forget about this one, though. Thank you!

    2. Painful, beautiful just totally amazing writing. You have the talent to make us feel Bette’s anguish through your extraordinary writing. It requires a sequel.

    3. hey, dear! So, you do not you write it to the end of this story for that: “to be continued.” This was one of my favorites, what you wrote, and I was hoping it turns out that was Bette hallucinating or was the reality she saw?
      but I understand you.
      as I was once told, this is amazing story, with its painful way.
      please continue soon :-)

    4. It was so painful to read, how ever you did write it so good. I could really feel the pain Bette is feeling.

      I hope you will write the sequel.

      Call it weird, but i read this one more than once, before i decided to leave a comment.

      I know somebody who wanted to commit suïcide, so for me it’s hard to read.

      But like i already said, it’s beautiful written.

    5. Just read this again and it’s still so painful, but written so very well. Please don’t let this be the end of Bette….write a sequel. :)

    6. I always felt that was Bette problem, she love Tina more than she love herself and that’s not good. Tina treated bette horribly even though she cheated on her but with everything Tina did nobody deserves that kind of pain especially if that person is already broken…smh so sad

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