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    The Promise

    Story written on February 7, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51982
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    Chapter 23 – A woman who takes things from a man is a girlfriend, but a man who takes things from a woman is a gigalo.

    Dash: HEY…make sure to get her some flowers…whichever kind are favorite.

    @}~~~~~

    Alice rushed in the front door pitching clothes and shoes everywhere on her way to the bedroom.

    Alice: Alright I have an hour before the show.

    Alice hopped in the shower and quickly got ready to meet up with Tina. She let the hot water flood her body with relaxation. She thought she heard something in the living room, but she ignored it, pushing it to the back of her mind with the rest of the days activities. She lost herself in the steam that engulfed her. Alice inhaled deeply and smelled a husky scent she knew but couldnt place. She opened her eyes to see a single red rose floating in front of her face. She pulled back the curtain to see Shane standing there holding a rose into the shower.

    Alice: What…

    Shane: You didnt let me finish my sentence….

    Alice: What sentence? I dont know what youre….

    Shane: Al…

    Alice: Yeah Shane?

    Shane: Shut up, Im trying to be smooth here.

    Alice: Oh ok.

    Alice looked at the floor of the tub.

    Shane: I was gonna say, I know you wanted to meet for that poetry thing at six, but I was hoping to meet up with you early and grab a cup of coffee…you know hang out and talk…like friends….but you hung up on me.

    Alice began to blush. Shane looked her up and down with a coy look on her face. Alice grabbed the curtain and pulled it in front of her body.

    Alice: You really meant to say that?

    Shane nodded

    Alice: Then stop thinking what youre thinking right now, or well be late to the show….

    Shane stood smelling the rose while staring at Alice seductively.

    Shane: Is that for me?

    Shane nodded.

    Alice: I figured Id get you your favorite flower, since youre my new favorite girl.

    Alice ducked her head down and brushed her wet hair away.

    Alice: So Im your favorite girl?

    Shane: Mmmm…well on Wednesdays you are…

    Alice: Shut up and give me a kiss.

    Alice grabbed the front of Shanes button-up shirt and pulled her in for a torrid kiss.

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    1. You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few

    2. Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.

    3. Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
      As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
      EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx

    4. Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.

    5. ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!

    6. Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.

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