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The Promise
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Shane nodded. She leaned in and read the screen. Both sat in anticipation of Shanes reaction. Shanes hand rested on Bettes lower thigh and she moved her fingers over the imaginary keys as she played the piano accompaniment that she thought would go with the song. Shane turned to Bette and smiled.
Bette: You like it?
Shane nodded with a huge grin.
Bette: Okay but do you think shell like it?
Shane: Absolutely Bette,…this is good..I cant believe you wrote this.
Shane looked a little nervous and sat back in her chair.
Bette: Whats wrong?
Shane: Nothing…
Bette: Shane?
Shane: Remember when you called last night?
Bette: Yeah…
Shane: I.. I wrote something for Alice also…but its nothing like this….its nowhere near as…
Bette grabbed Shane into a tight hug. She brought her lips to her ear and whispered.
Bette: Shell love it…even if you sing the alphabet….did you mean everything you wrote?
Shane nodded.
Bette: Then knowing you its brilliant and your nervous just because this is new to you…Im so happy youre letting her in…I think shes perfect for you…would you mind if I …
Shane pulled out of the embrace and pulled the crumpled piece of paper from the front pocket of her jeans. She held it up with two fingers, and Bette snatched it before she could hand it to her.
Bette: Yes, yes, yes!
Bette wiggled in her seat like a little kid. Shane rolled her eyes and shook her head.
Shane: And Im the one whos the big kid?
Bette: Shut up!
Bette opened the paper and began reading as Shane leaned back into her chair and crossed her arms. Bette covered her mouth and Shane lowered her head. She played with her eyebrow nervously as she waited for her to finish.
Bette: Awww
Bettes eyes watered as she turned the paper over to see if there was more.
Bette: Shane…this is amazing…its brilliant….I…Im speechless.
Shane blushed and she could feel her ears burning.
Bette: Dont play modest Casanova….you knew it was good.
Bette ruffled Shanes hair and wiped away the tears that streaked her cheeks. Bette looked back at her laptop and became nervous.
Bette: Uhm…Shane…I was wondering…I wanted to play this for Tina, and I talked to Kit this morning…a little too early for her liking…anyway, she said Big Daddy would be happy to let me use his studio tomorrow to record a rough track…the thing is…
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I love this story so much, it’s my favorite. I can’t function right cause I’m always checking for updates. I can’t wait to see where you take this. I love the Shane & Bette duo. Also, anticipating where you take the Dash storyline. Can’t wait for the next update.
Wow Al and Tina are really mad at Shane and Bette. I can’t wait to see how they will react to the truth. need a new fix soon.
This is too funny. I am so loving this.
Your story keeps getting better and better. I’m thoroughly addicted…there I’ve said it. And admitting it is the first step.
Woah…girl.. there are two really angry women here.. look out…nothing worse than a woman scorned.. but two.. OUCH.. can’t wait to see where you are going to take us next.. oh..even better crumbs here!!! “wink”
Amazing writing J! I loved this chapter and loved the line that Dana gave Shane to respond to Cherie with! Can’t wait for the next update..~winks and tries to wait patiently for the next part~
aww the webs u weave!! is Bette so blind she cant see that Tina is pissed off?? Saturday had better be good to win these two back!!
Excellent chapter again luv! and as for “how r things?” all I can say is same shit different day, u know? I did tell someone though, it was intese but I feel so much better and I can just be myself! WooHoo!
You should see the stupid smile on my face every time I’m reading one of your stories. Hell girl – you’re just brilliant.
Excellent, just excellent: length, content, humor, et al. I sure hope Tina and Alice’s regard for Bette and Shane’s friendship softens after they realize all the work the two have done together to help each other out in their respective intimate relationships. I guess we shall see what transpires eventually, since you did note that the next three days will be drawn out painfully slow. ;-)
Sorry, another long comment for a story I love so much.
It’s a thing to prepare a lovely and sincere surprise for her woman and it’s another to be almost indifferent with her : Bette don’t try touch, don’t smile and don’t talk to Tina. Why ? Doesn’t she see what Tina feel ? Doesn’t she see Tina take off her ring ? She doesn’t see Tina at all. A few minutes ago, she was affectionate with Shane. That’s Tina miss from Bette : loving. With Bette, it’s full or nothing, no ?
OK Shane try it and Alice don’t want. It’s normal, when Shane talk to Alice, she says… so she say. God, it’s complicated for these girls.
I love this little drama and dialogues are also funny.
It will be interesting to know what Alice and Tina think and what they’re doing to do thinking Bette and Shane are lovers.
Please update soon and thanks for this very good story.
LMAO, the last part is brilliant, okay the whole story is but the last part… I laughed so hard. I cant believe you once said you thought you couldn’t do funny..5stars girl!
Love Shane and Bette together, i hope Alice and Tina will wait for them untill saturday.
Ha ha ha, I love the Pussy Willow flower, that’s funny! Can’t wait to see what the girls have in store, hopefully Al and Tina will wait till after Bette’s plan has run it’s course before they kill em! :)
I can’t wait to see how this gets resolved! Very good!! I can’t wait for the next update!!
We have to angry,pissed off ladies and two that are so wraped up in what they are doing that they dont see what is going on. Danais the quite one,but some times so alert and smart. Hope the two angry one will wait for a few days before they kill Bette and Shane. thanks so much.
This is wonderful….and funny….keep going….another chap soon?
i really like this story.
I have been following this story and I am not sure if I have ever left a comment before, but I guess I will now. Thanks for this story. It has made the wait for the much anticipated second season bright. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing with us.
Ok this is good and keep coming, post soon. Thank you!
OMFG! This is so great… It’s hilarious! “God, I think Dane would shit tennis balls if you just sat down at the piano and started playing.”