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The Promise
You are invited for a journey through your favorite world….
Alice tried to think of what her favorite world was…other than the bedroom she couldnt imagine where else she would want to be. Just then the phone rang and she jumped.
Alice: Hello?
Shane: Hows my American Beauty?
Alice smiled and blushed.
Alice: I knew you wouldnt leave me hanging for Valentines day.
Shane: You sure about that? Go to the bathroom.
Alice: Why…Shane what is this? I dont get the invitation….
Shane: Ahh, but soon you will. But my lady needs to start her journey in the bathroom…
Alice: But I dont have to.
Shane: Al just go to the bathroom and open the door..ahhh…*****…
Alice: You okay?
Shane: Yeah just go..
Alice walked to the bathroom and opened the door to see the floor had a trail of pink rose petals that led up to the bathtub that was filled with a steaming bubble bath with rose petals and candles floating within the water. She gasped as she saw the candles that lined the room and balanced on the edge of the sink.
Alice: Shane…its beautiful…howd you do this?
Alice walked over and sat on the edge of the tub with tears in her eyes.
Shane: Dont get all mushy on me now, theres a lot more to come.
Alice: Howd you know I …
Shane: I can hear you sobbing…now I know this scene calls for red rose petals but I told you ..I dont celebrate Valentines day, and I wont do red.
Alice: Huh? Why do they have to be red petals?
Shane: Think about it Al…..now get in while the waters still hot.
Alice: Where are you? Howd you do this while I was on the couch, the waters still hot?
Shane: Its magic…Practical Magic, now get in!
Alice: When will you join me? Are you in the bedroom?
Shane: No now get in Alice…we have a long night ahead of us if youre not going to follow the plan.
::Click::
Alice sat the phone on the floor and undressed. She climbed in and sat back enjoying the heat.
@}~~~~~
Tina leaned back in the tub and rested her head against the wall. Bette reached back with one hand and stroked Tinas jaw line.
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(25 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!