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The Promise
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Alice: Is that you?
Shane: No but trust me, I wish it was.
Alice put on the robe and ran to the front door. As she approached, she could hear music playing from the hall. She opened the door and covered her mouth. Alice fell to the floor laughing and dropped the phone. She picked it up and held her side from the pain. Before her stood a propped up mannequin with its arms held in the air. Taped to its hands was a small CD player that played In Your Eyes
Alice: Oh my God…So you still wont stand outside my door holding a boom-box over your head?
Shane slid through the window of the bathroom and collapsed onto the floor. Rose petals stuck to her sweaty ski mask and hands as she lay sweating and gasping for breath.
Shane: Yeah….I….I told you love…Im not that smart….you know I take my love the hard way.
Alice: You Okay …you sound out of breath…guess all those cigarettes are catching up to you after playing ding-dong ditch?
Shane: Nah … I told you …Practical Magic.
@}~~~~~
Dash stood at the end of the hall at the edge of the corner. She hunched over and placed her hands on her knees gasping for air. She was decked out in all black and tried to removed her fancy ski mask but couldnt get it off. She touched her ear piece to turn it on.
Dash: Marky Mark to the Funky bunch…Im dying here and all Ive done is run down the hall.
James: Yeah this hi-tech ***** Bette got is killing me.
@}~~~~~
Alice: So uhm…what else is on this journey?
Shane: You still have no idea what were doing here do you?
Alice walked over and reread the card. She played with the tie to her robe as she reread it over and over.
Alice: Okay it says journey into my favorite world…but I dont know what that means…
Shane: Love…if you could be doing anything right now what would it be?
Alice: Honestly?
Shane: Yeah…
Alice: Id be laying in bed with you in my arms watching you sleep…I mean really sleep.
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That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!