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The Promise
Shane: Alright lets get to work already. Dash you go up to the roof, and James well start unlocking the windows. Then well start hiding stuff.
James jumped up to start working and Dash and Shane looked up at him.
James: Well are we going to do this or what?
Dash and Shane held up their beers.
Dash: Uhm hello! Beers before *****!
James rolled his eyes and stormed off to unlock the windows throughout the apartment.
Alice sat at her desk when her intercom rang.
Ms. Pieszecki?
Alice rolled her eyes and pressed the button so that they could talk both ways.
Alice: Sabrina I told you to call me Alice or Al..
Sabrina: Yes Ms…I mean uhm Alice, Shane is on line one.
Alice switched lines and leaned back while she sipped her coffee.
Shane: Hey love
Alice: Hey there yourself…..hows the crash course in everything Willy Shakes?
Shane: Ehh shes picked it up quick….I think shes only nervous cause she thinks I expect her to knock everyones socks off…
Alice: Which you do
Shane snickered into the phone. Alice could hear the dog barking in the background.
Alice: Arg! Shane, please keep him down, or theyre going to start charging me as a pet owning tenant.
Shane: Oh were not at your place…were at the beach.
Alice: The beach…doesnt she have lessons today?
Shane: Uh…welll
Alice heard whispering.
Alice: Please tell me you didnt lie to Father Joe to get her out.
Shane: Nope, I did not lie to Father Joe…
Alice: Or keep out vital details?
Shane: Whats that? Your breaking up…I must be going through a tunnel…
Alice: Shane there are no tunnels in L.A.!!!
Shane: I meant under a bridge…yeah …talk to you later…
Alice: Wait what did you call for?
Shane: Oh yeah…to tell you I probably wont be home late tonight…in fact Ill probably just go to my place cause Dash is crashing and she hates sleeping on your couch.
Alice: WHAT!
Shane: Still cant go one day with out this stud huh?
Alice: No I wanted to do something tonight…
Shane: Why? Like what?
Alice: Shane…I thought a movie, or dinner…candle lit bath for two?
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(25 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
That was great..so romantic, sexy and funny. Wonderful writing!!!!
I laughed so hard I think I tore my Pu*** muscle..hee hee.. that was simply genius.. thank for the tiny crumbs.. looking for more.
Yes, Shane is so… ? Romantic ? Yes (à sa façon). Love Alice and Shane.
Oh, does Bette says to tina about Mission Impossible 1 & 2 ? Happy to seee them like this.. lovers.
Another great chapter.
WOW! I found myself laughing out loud several times, which doesn’t happen too often when I’m reading. So well done..absolutley one of my favorites so far!
Hey! waking up to these fics is one of my fave parts of the day, especially if ur chapters are up there! this one was soo funny and romantic, i love how u have potrayed James that is too funny!!
Loved each word thanks
This was pure genius! I absolutely loved every moment of it, especially: “James stood on the roof tugging at his ski mask as he turned on the lights and lit the candles. He then sat on the floor and cried as he started what should have been his easiest task…blowing up the raft.” I let out the biggest guffaw and almost cried myself…too funny. Man, this chapter cracked me my ass up, but also appealed to my sensi side. Thanks!
‘army issued thermal wear’ That was just too funny as I imagined the “mission”. Bette can be so evil!!!! Great story. I’m still waiting for Saturday?!?
What a Valentine’s Day!!!
Wow, that was an awesome chapter and thank you so much…. had an awful ballet class this morning at your story made my day so much better. I laughed out loud and also shed a few tears… I’m the soppy kind! ha ha Thanks again! :)
Alice: I thought you don’t celebrate Valentine’s day?
Shane: I don’t….I’m celebrating you.
f*cking brilliant! you write shane and al so well. thanks so much for this story!
That was awsome. Great valentin story with lost of funny thing. Totally loved it.
That hot and so romantic, post soon. Thank you!