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The Promise
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Alice could feel the warm and wet air enrapture her body as Shane peeled the towel off of her. She arched her back and raised her hips as she felt the absurdly expensive champagne poured across her body. She looked up to see Dash dousing her with the liquid bubbly with a devilish grin on her face.
Alice let a moan escape as she felt each individual bubble burst against her skin. Shanes velvety tongue began lapping up the champagne from her stomach as Dash tossed the bottle on the floor and leaned in for another torrid kiss.
Shane: Thats it….just relax and enjoy the night Alice.
Shane tapped Dash on the shoulder and gently pulled her towards her. She made a gentle dismount from Alice and motioned for Dash to get into position. Alice looked up to see the apprehension spread across the young girls face. She slowly eased her body on top of Alices and lowered her body weight as if she were scared shed hurt her. Dash pulled off her bandana and sunglasses and tossed them across the room. Alice smiled at her to reassure her that everything would be alright, until she realized what she was doing.
Alice: Shane….were so getting locked up for this…shes jail-bait man!
Shane spread out alongside Alice on her side and propped her head in her hand. With her free hand she traced lazy circles across Alices abdomen causing her to squirm under Dash. The slight movement caused a whimper to escape Dash and when the women looked at her she flushed with embarrassment.
Shane wiggled her finger, signaling Dash to come forward and she leaned in slowly towards Shane. Shane cupped her face and whispered into her ear until Dash began to loosen up and smile. Shane eased herself back down alongside Alice and watched as Dash began kissing and nibbling along Alices collarbone.
Shane brushed her hand along Dashs back to encourage her exploration of Alices upper body. She pet her young pupil to set her at ease and succeeded as Dash became more relaxed and cupped Alices *****.
Shane: Make sure you give every inch of her equal attention….this is about her not you….you want to listen to her body and give her what her bodys asking for.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.