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The Promise
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She shut off the TV and rubbed her temples to relieve the stress behind her eyes formed from the battery of TV shows and articles shed pumped out in four days. Alice wrote eight articles since Tina walked out the apartment with Jenny bouncing on her arm, in hopes that her editor would be impressed and run one of them. Her best featured a human interest story on song writing, and even included a top ten list of the most influential but unknown song writers of all time, just to keep him happy with his stupid lists.
Alice got up to search the fridge, but stopped when she reached the entrance of the kitchen. It seemed like every time she walked in, she could feel Shanes hands on her. She could feel her weight pressed up against her. Smell her expensive shampoo and react to her warm breath as it grazed her ear. A shiver went down her spine as she thought of the Lip Venom she wore and the numbing tingle it caused on her lips.
Alice flipped off the lights, and made her way to the bedroom. She sat down on the edge of the bed and laid back keeping her feet pressed firmly into the carpet. She let out a heavy sigh as she felt the velvet night ease over her as she stared off
Alice woke to the sound of Shanes husky voice. She could hear it elevating around her.
Shane: Wake up sleeping beauty.
A ghost of a smile drifted across Alices face as she awoke from her slumber. She could hear the deep chuckle hovering on top of her as Shane pressed her body against her. When she realized she was just imagining things, she jumped to full attention. She sat up and pushed her sweaty hair out of her face. She let out a few deep breaths as she covered her face with her hands. Alice leaned back, propping herself up on her elbows, while she regained her composure. She closed her eyes and thought of the words to the song shed written and sang to Shane.
…one of the many
one of the few
to stand back and wait for you
excuse me Mrs. Busy body
could you pencil me in when you can
though we both know that the worst part about it
is I would be free when you wanted me
if you wanted me…if you wanted me
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.