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    The Promise

    Story written on April 30, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 51 – pink roses

    Before she could dive into the deep dark hole known as Shanes self loathing the door crept open.

    Dr. Solano: Are you ready for me yet?

    Shane: Uhm…Yeah..I mean yes…uh…Maam.

    Shane sat curled in a ball as the beautiful Hispanic woman flowed into the room. She had long curly spiral hair that bounced as she drifted over to her. Her body curved in all the right places and her skin was like coffee ice cream. The woman stood in front of Shane in a set of identical hospital scrubs and pulled over a wheeling chair and a portable table that was covered with a cloth. She pulled a cord form the table and plugged it into the floor. She then sat down next to Shane and looked her up and down. Dr. Solano could feel Shanes terror radiating from her. The young woman was sitting up and clinging tightly to her legs in front of her. She seemed in a trance and her arms were shaking. She placed a hand on Shanes shoulder and rubbed her back. Shane looked up at her and flinched when she felt the advances of the strange woman.

    Dr. Solano moved close and wrapped her arms around Shane. Shane was in shock at the doctors intrusion into her personal space, but found herself loosening under her grip. Shane reached out her frail arms and hesitantly wrapped them around the doctor as she pulled her in closer.

    Dr. Solano: There you go….everythings going to be fine.

    Shane listened to the womans smooth New York accent floated into her ear, reassuring her that things, might just work out. The doctor pulled back and Shane found herself clinging to her as she pushed her bangs out of her eyes.

    Shane: I couldnt find a gown.

    Shane croaked out the only thing she could think of and mentally kicked herself for the childishness in the words she spoke.

    Dr. Solano: We dont use gowns here…we all wear the same thing so we are equals.

    Doctor Solano stood up to her full height and smiled a genuine smile at Shane. Shane noticed for the first time they were dressed alike. It made her think that with any toss of the coin, maybe these women could be sitting on opposite sides of the table. Funny how the decisions and actions of others could totally ***** someone else up for life.

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    4. 2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.

    5. WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D

    7. Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~

    9. WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.

    11. OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!

    13. lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious

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