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    The Promise

    Story written on April 30, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 51 – pink roses

    Woman 2: Oh my…..NO we only have female doctors here…no men are allowed beyond the door….same on the other side..no women are allowed past their door…..This is about catering to you…and the interview is so you can get to know the doctors and pick the one you want….but I went ahead and set you up with Mrs. Porters doctor…shes no nonsense and tells it like it is….she gives Bette a run for her money….starts off sweet and innocent, then she gets everything out of you..anyway you can watch am movie while you wait…

    Shane: Woah…..its kinda….

    Woman 2: I know….but its what women need….after all having a male doctor is like having a mechanic who never owned a car!

    Shane gasped and smiled for the first time since breakfast.

    Shane: I said the same thing!

    Shane took the rest of her espresso and jumped when her pager vibrated. She bit her bottom lip and looked down at her hands.

    Woman 2: I promise…things will go okay dear…youre in good hands.

    Shane stood and walked towards her fate.

    Shane: Yeah…but Im still in someone elses hands

    Shane stood in front of door number thirteen with her hand on the *****.

    Shane: Of course Id have room thirteen.

    Shane opened the door and entered the room with dim lighting. She saw the cabinet in the corner and opened it to find stacks of pastel hospital scrubs. She looked through all of the cabinets in confusion but couldnt find any of the barely-there gowns they used in the hospital. She began to strip and put on the hospital scrubs feeling like she was setting herself up to look like an idiot. She folded her clothes and placed them on the love seat in the corner and hopped up on the table in the middle of the room.

    Shane was surprised to find the table that she expected to be hard, cold and uncomfortable was completely the opposite. The table was more of a small bed, and there was a pillow she could rest her head on. Shane sat with her knees to her chest and looked around the room checking the place out. There was art on the walls that she could identify, thanks to countless lunches with Bette, and she could see the different brush strokes and determine the mind set of the artist. Shane smiled to herself, realizing that having Bette rub off on her wasnt so bad. Bette. She became sullen when she thought of the way she had treated Bette earlier that morning.

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    4. 2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.

    5. WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D

    7. Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~

    9. WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.

    11. OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!

    13. lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious

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