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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 30
Her efforts were rewarded in the smile that graced Bettes caramel cheeks. Tina couldnt see the smile, but she could hear it in her girlfriends voice. Thats only part of the reason. You do have wonderful *****, T.
Thanks, babe. The other reason?, asked Tina.
The other reason is that I can hear your heartbeat, T. Its very soothing., said Bette.
Is it?, asked Tina, smiling warmly, her spirit lighter after hearing her girlfriends charming words.
Mmmhmm. It is. Ive got this soothing heartbeat, your very comforting and beautiful twin Cs against me, and your body heat to keep me warm. This is paradise, baby., said Bette.
Bette.you can turn off the charm. You already have me. Im already yours., said Tina, stroking Bettes dark curls.
I know. But its true, T. This really is my favorite spot.
Thats sweet, babe. You know where my favorite spot is?, asked Tina.
Where?, asked Bette.
If youre goodIll tell you later., said Tina.
Ahh. Such a tease, Kennard. Such a tease.
Tina smiled and said, Its not really a tease if you actually do get to find out. Then its more likesuspense.
Bette was quiet for a moment and then she said, Hmmmm..Well, Id much rather be held in suspense than teased. So.as much as I dont want to move, Im gonna head to the shower so we can get outta here and I can get closer to finding out that favorite spot of yours.
As Bette pulled away and stood up, using Tinas body to balance her weight, the loving blonde replied Well, try not to have too much fun in there. Ill be awaiting your return.
Bette grinned at her soul mate and rushed off to get clean. She showered in record time and dressed in the jeans and cute purple polo Tina had laid out for her. When they were ready to go, the girls walked downstairs and heard Janice speaking on the phone in the den. It seemed Bette had jinxed them. The minute she started the water, the condolence phone calls started pouring in.
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(54 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
I love this story because it shows how great and sad the thing called love can be at the same time. Post soon
Oh thank GOODNESS you updated!!! I was about to shut down my computer, and decided to give the site one more try. Whew, did I get lucky!!! Great post as always!!
Rarely, I am in awe….but this story is truly awesome. This is a beautiful and realistic work of art. Thanks MTS!
You are masterful…God, I love this story.
This was a great update for a late Sunday night.
Thanks for the nightcap!
K
Wonderful chapter. Wish I could find someone like B or T to complete me. I love this. Can’t wait for more, don’t stay gone too long.
MTS, it’s official!! I am obsessed with this story. I typically print this story out and read it at work (damn internet security at work will not let me access this site). So this morning, I was all excited to see another post from you. I printed out the story, got distracted, and forgot it!!! Ugggghhhhh!!! I was cussing myself all day, and couldn’t wait to get home and read this chapter. As always, it was well worth the wait and anticipation. You are amazing!!
I’m with nzgirl..lol. Will you make my wish come true? : D
this was wonderful, i was so excited to see you posted and really savour reading it, you know, i read it slowly and digest the words and descriptions. wow :) so good
I am still enjoying this story & looking forward to every post. It’s a great storyline that you’ve developed wonderfully.
I love this story. Please dont ever stop writing it. I loved this chapter and cant wait for the next one. You have a way with words.
yay!you posted nice to have you back . Dont stop now post again soon awesome story
I just checked and i can’t believe i was about to miss this chapter..and what an update, i loved it, it’s much lighter than the last one..
Bette sounded like a loser in high school, hehehe but i can understand her, i went through the same thing in mid school..
BTW thanks for the compliment, Queen of L word vids, now thats an honor.. *bows* and don’t u dare call this master piece a small story.. i’ve been reading from the very begining, but i’m too lazy to leave a comment.. hehehe ok i know this one is too long.. any way thanks for the update..
Okay, this will be like your 500th comment but I will comment just the same. Your story is so full of love and giving. The love Bette and Tina have in your story makes everyone want that unconditional love. Baby I am so proud of you. You should see the smile on my face right now.
Damn what a beutiful and amazing chapter, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
Wow! I’m just amazed by the quality of your writing and the descriptions of detail.
WOW! MTS I’m still catching up your Story I love it that was so Awesome Story I’m just come back on vacation I’m really like you’re Story so keep it going your Amazing writer I love it post soon.
MTS…thanks for the longgggggg chapter…i really enjoyed it… then again i always enjoy your stories… so i can’t wait till the melvin comes home…bring it on…
*sings* did you ever know that you’re my heroooo?
No, I’m serious, you are! I’m totally and utterly addicted. Seriously, don’t EVER stop writing or um…well I’d be quite upset
Great chapter! <3
I hope Grandma, Aunty, or dad didn’t happen to see the little lover’s kiss. Just went to my first Pride this past Saturday. We had a festival after and the feeling of freedom permeated the day. Couples holding hands, dancing, and kissing marked the wonderful event. Thanks for your story MTS!!!
Speaking of triple doubles – you again nail the landing. Truly wonderful writing – It is so good.
and another great chapter! i love your story because you show how much they really love each other! can’t wait for the next one!
MTS: “How late were you to that appointment??” Hey MTS:) Let’s say I was just in time;) I caught that guy when he was closing his office. I was like:”are you Mr. X? O.k. I’m a little late but we have to talk.” Thanks for posting more often again. That was really soothing chapter, very cute!
Maybe they can have a little sex on the beach.
This is my second comment on this story. I’m just curious MTS….are you really only 18 (read it from one of the comments)….I could have sworn that you were older with a lot more experience….second, do you live in the San Diego are or did you just do your research? I’m from Finland, but I felt like I was in SD.
Aw…cute cute chapter…I loved the fact that this chapter mainly focused on our two gals…awesome!! So much love between those two, I can only hope to find love as true as their’s one day…thanks MTS!!=D
MTS,
Many thanks for the personal reply.
I just speak from the heart. Your story is just magnificent. I marvel at this masterpiece every time you add a chapter. The characters live and breathe in this realistic and believable universe you have created. The feeling and emotions are tangible as every twist and turn pulls Bette and Tina apart before tenderly re-uniting them. New characters have joined as if they have always been integral to the saga and provided much pleasure, excitement and distress. In a lesser writer’s hands, this could have been ham-fisted however in your capable and talented hands in has been seamless.
I adore this break away from the despair and drama of Bette’s family and her anguished relationship with her mother. Tina is there; a constant force to care, share and protect her lover.
Can’t wait for your next installment as will spent the rest of the day with a big grin and a happy song in my head.
Much gratitude as always,
Your Loyal Fan
Great chapter as all your chapters are. I like how Tina didn’t let Bette off the hook but kept at her to get the whole story which is one that is so true. I puts in prespective the way that Bette approached fitting in and how she came to the decision to be herself. Thanks so much for the charming B&T
This story always leaves me feeling all warm inside for the two of them. They fit so well together. I really love this story!
I just love their connection. Their openness (is that a word?) and their honesty with each other. Together they seem to be able to face whatever the world has to throw at them, and as long as their together, they’ll be okay. Post soon, and thanks again.
I just love their connection. Their openness (is that a word?) and their honesty with each other. Together they seem to be able to face whatever the world has to throw at them, and as long as their together, they’ll be okay. Post soon, and thanks again.
When I dont think it is possible for this story to get any better, it seems you pull it off every time.
Wow, uhh… 2 cool points… I cant get away with much here in Vegas with two cool pionts so what do you say we go double or nothing?
MTS, tis absolutely beautiful, amazing. I am so in love with this story it’s not even funny. Wow. Can’t wait for more!
mts you brung it girl. trust and respect. 2 very wonderful words. mom needs to fix that gulf that separates them. i really enjoy this story, it was so nice to find on a late sunday night. post soon please.
*Sigh* I love how they put each other at such ease. Your story exemplifies everything that love and relationships should be about. Thank you, MTS.
Hmm… today is a good day. I found your post and another fave author of mine. And Loved those comments that you leave in the beginning of the chapters though it’s damn long. I’m loving your story more and more. A break from intensity is always good.
Your story rules!!!! Keep it up. I reckon all your readers feel love for this writing talent of yours
BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER.LOVE HOW THEY ARE SO OPENED WITH EACHOTHER..GREAT GREAT JOB.THANKS
finally! I caught up and I am More Than Satisfied :)
Another amazing chapter to your great epic BT tale, I wish you could make this into a movie!! :)
Wow, what can I say. This was simply beautiful. These two have such loving tenderness between them. Your writing leaves me breathless! Now on to more important matters…our girls are definitely in need of some alone time. Don’t keep us waiting! Tina said it best, “You know I’m easily excitable, babe.†LOL
I have been reading right from the start and you are simply fabulous! Love the story! Hope you update soon! I will be looking forward to it! =)
Ahhh – a happy sigh that my Lab Coat’s stories always bring :) I sound like a parrot, but LOVE IT, MTS. You are a master at weaving this tale and I’ll be here each post :) Happy 4th!