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Bette wanted to state her case again. She wanted to shake some sense into her. She wanted to tell her that they could have what they were feeling right now, forever. But she was tired of arguing. She was tired of selling herself to Tina. She was tired of trying to convince her of the obvious; neither of them would ever be really happy with anyone else.
Instead, she said nothing. She got up off the couch noticing Tina’s disappointment and the tears forming in her eyes. Before they could fall onto her beautiful face, Bette held out her hand. Tina looked up not knowing what it meant right away. It wasn’t until Bette was leading her toward the direction of the master bedroom, that Tina understood what was going on.
Tina thought her legs might give out before she reached the room. She was a in a state of panic, afraid that Bette might be disappointed in her inexperience. She chided herself for not even knowing for sure why they were going to the bedroom. Maybe Bette just wanted to lie down more comfortably. After all, they had done that before. She decided to wait and see what the brunette was going to do.
They walked in the room with the beautiful view of the ocean. The windows were open, letting the cool salt air in. Tina took a deep breath, loving the scent and waited. She noticed the two robes as Bette lit candles throughout the room. This was for real. They were going to make love and Tina put her hand over heart thinking that it may have stopped.
Bette walked back over to her and put her arms around her. She looked deep into her eyes.
“I don’t know if we’ll regret this and if I’m right and being with you will ruin me forever but I don’t care right now. All I know is that I love you and I can’t spend eternity wondering what it would have been like to be with you.”
Tina knew at that moment that this was going to be the most memorable experience of her life.
“I want you but I don’t want to disappoint you, Bette. I’ve…never done this before. What if it’s memorable cause it’s bad?”
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awesome, absolutely awesome!!!!
AMAZING STORY!!!! Thank you PPMS
Thanks for this story. I love happy endings :)
Beautiful. Completely different and perfectly written.
You are such an amazing writer! Thank you soo much for continuing to post and sharing your talent with us. What a great story!!!
Great story.
Oh my goodness! That was really, really, really, really good! I was just about to cry and was trying to stop it. Thanks for sharing this with us. I LOVE THIS!
Awww damn, you had me cryig like a baby, my heart was as broken as Bette’s was and then you fixed it. I wondered how on earth Tina could leave after Bette made love to her. Dang, I’m glad she went back. And she was right, she was married once that day and she made the right decision. Thanks for such a beautiful story, so sad and yet that’s how life is. Thanks for bringing this one to us.
That was soooo good. Thanks!
I really thought you were going to break my heart but Tina did it, she came back to the one person who held her heart.
That was amazing sad, beautiful and hot, hot, hot. I was crying when the ladies were sayin good-bye, but you put that smile back on my face with the last two paragraphs.
Amazing, HOT – HOT – HOT
Amazing:Right decision Tina.Thank you.PPS
That was awesome and wonderful, love it. So happy for them and glad Tina make a right decision. Please post more, thanks!
Whew, girl. You had me going! Loved it!!!
Good story bro!
The whole time I was reading this I’m thinking, fix it, please fix it. Then I started to get sadder. Thinking please please fix it. And you fixed it :) Yhey!!!
Lovely story, JBM. Thanks :)
I hardly ever curse unnecessarily but damn this warrants it.. This one-off was FUCKING AMAZING!!! JBM!!! I totally love this story and I loved how you portrayed their angst and the sorrow, the love and the sex and the inevitable reunion, their bond was described so beautifully!! :) Am bookmarking this!!! Thanks so much, hope you keep feeling prolific!! hahaha.. :D
Ok, truth: I read the 1st page and started the 2nd, but then immediately went to the last page, because there was no way my heart could take their last night together if Tina married Eric! And no, reading the end didn’t spoil the story because what was in between was lovely, and hot, and sweet! Thanks for sharing!
Wow, very heart wrenching! Thank god you had Tina come to her senses. Thanks for the post.
I’m going to take a cold shower before I read the next post.
that was great thanks….i could feel their pain
WoW! Simply Wow! Excellent story. Thank you. Just simply awesome :)
HEy JB, That was awesome.there was tenderness and understanding mixed with confusion and hurt. Hot monkey loving with the softest of caresses. You made me weep and laugh, sigh and shout.Just wonderfully and beautifully written.Thank you so much.Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, what an amazingly beautiful story. “she had the cutest freckles all over like stars waiting to be named.” My favorite line from the story. This was beautifully written. While I was reading, I was hoping that Tina would show up on Bette’s doorstep in her wedding dress. Simply beautiful :)
wow you had me balling…thanks for the ending!!!