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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 2

    Story written on November 1, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Love rain down on me

    Shane got up and made sure she had everything “Thank you so much for the food Ms. Morales”.

    “You’re very welcome and you’re not leaving with out a hug either” Ms. Morales beckoned for Shane to come over and embraced her in another bear hug when she did.

    “Bye ma” Carmen said as she made her way outside. By now the downpour had lessoned into a light drizzle and the area smelled of fresh grass and that unique scent that only appeared after it rained hard. Shane jogged up to the jeep and opened the passenger door for Carmen who smiled and planted a chaste kiss on her cheek. She walked over to the drivers side, climbed in the car, and gave Carmen a light stare of death.

    “What?!” Carmen exclaimed in mock innocence.

    “How am I supposed to act straight when you do that to me?”

    “I thought you maintained your composure very well”

    “With no help from you”

    “Oh, I’m sorry baby. What can I do to make it better” as she said this, she placed her left hand on Shane’s knee and her right hand on the steering wheel and leaned forward just an inch away from Shane’s waiting lips.

    And there they were trapped in that moment. Lips hovering dangerously close each others and not daring to make a move. After what seemed like an eternity, Shane lifted Carmen’s hand from her knee and kissed the middle of the palm of her hand.

    “We’ll talk about it later” she gave her a lopsided grin and turned on the ignition.

    ————————————————————————————————–

    “So, what do you want to see?” Shane asked. They were standing in front of the movie theater at the Beverly Center while the crowd moved about. They were holding hands and Carmen’s head was resting on Shane’s shoulder.

    “I don’t know, I kind of wanted to see The Legend of Zorro but I heard it was *****”

    Shane chuckled and ran her hand through her hair, “Well how about Saw II. The acting may be ***** but at least the first one had a crazy twist at the end”.

    Carmen contemplated this for a moment and then a knowing smile crossed her lips, “You like scary movies?” she lifted her head to look Shane in the eye.

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    1. yay, i’m the first one! “ugh, i’m turning into such a lez.” that is so shane :). your writing has left me once again speechless. i love the details. you’re doing a great job sprinkling in carmen’s thoughts. much love!

    2. I’ll say it again, though myself a diehard Danish fan, you are making it hard not to jump ship. Not really but I guess I’ll have to have two ships now. Great story telling, and keep it coming. Hey and if you every want to write a danish story, I’ll be you number one fan. No stones please. Great story, looking foward to the next chapter. Deb

    3. Whew. Let me just get my heartrate to return to normal, and catch my breath! hah, thank you soooooooooo much for filling my Sharmen addiction. I completely agree, that there aren’t enough Sharmen fics. I guess it is a good thing in some ways though, because not everyone can get Shane down very well. You, however, do a VERY good job of writing her. Props to ya!

    4. Very nice! You just had to end it when it was getting good, eh? I guess this is what I get from teasing my readers; Shane-style Karma coming back to bite me in the ass. ;) Love the “tell me you don’t want this” bit – so hot! Totally can’t wait for the next part.

    5. Damn! That was HOT! Movie theatre is a great place for a makeout session, brought bach some great memories :) Loved Alice freaking out over the phone especially the drug dealer comment. Keep up the great work, Post soon.

    7. thank you for this update!It´s really good to see someone writing sharmen storys again.You really should have start earlier with writing. I love you story and I think this is just a slow start, that you have a lot of more in your mind.

    9. Yep. Love that line, tell me you don’t want this. Who would regist Shane’s charisma? One of my fav is shane’s thoughts. She is so cute. Second thing, Al and Shane’s chat is hilarius.The way you characterized is so real. Let me admire you! :)

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