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Tumbling Down
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“Alice said to,” answered Tabitha, shrugging and deciding it was time
for her to focus on her less drama filled customers as she headed to
the other side of the bar.
“It’s
Helena!” Alice squeaked the other woman’s name out in the same
deliriously happy tones in which she had said Dana’s earlier, causing
the athlete to flinch at the sound.
“Quite
right,” said Helena warmly, settling at the other side of Alice and
ignoring Dana’s presence. Her smoky blue eyes held a soft glow and she
cupped Alice’s cheek tenderly. “What have you been occupying yourself
with my darling?”
“Drinking,” said Alice, sounding rather grave as she stared Helena
down. When the British woman laughed exuberantly at this, she then
leaned closer to say more somberly yet, “I’ve been drinking a lot.”
“Why
is that?” questioned Helena, her eyes carefully lifting away from Alice
to lock onto Dana as she said the words. Sending the athlete a silent
message on her thoughts about their current situation which she felt
Dana held the blame for.
Positive she didn’t want to hear Alice’s response on this because like
Helena she already suspected what the answer would be, Dana pressed her
hand to the blonde’s back and said pointedly, “We should be taking her
home, not interrogating her.”
“I wasn’t aware a question leads naturally into an interrogation,”
drawled Helena, lifting an eyebrow before she focused on Alice and
smiled gently while taking her hands and helping her off the barstool.
“But perhaps I should have. This is America.”
Unwilling
or unable to make a reply, Dana simply stared Helena down and they
remained like that until Alice began hopping up and down, gaining both
of their attention. “Al?” asked Dana as she frowned in confusion. “What
are you doing?”
“My
foot’s asleep,” grumbled Alice, hopping and halfway stumbling about as
she did so. She paused in her hopping and in a rather violent gesture,
slammed her foot down hard. To then yelp and hop about after doing so.
“Ow! That hurt.”
At Alice’s cry of pain, Helena released a hissing sound of worry and
dropped to her knees, rubbing the foot that Alice had effectively
abused. Peering up at Alice and smiling as the blonde tangled her
fingers into her hair that had been hastily swept up in a bun, Helena
chided, “Of course it hurts. How else should it feel after you treated
it in such a violent manner?”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!