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Tumbling Down
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“Hey Al,” Tabitha called out her name and smirked when the blonde
slowly swiveled around to face her, a confused look furrowing her brow.
She held up the cell phone and said, “I’m gonna call someone to pick
you up. Who should I dial?”
“My girlfriend,” said Alice simply, squinting at Tabitha and regarding her as if she was a talking cucumber of some sort.
“Right,” drawled Tabitha with a chuckle. “Who is…?”
“Dana,” said Alice, plunking her glass down on the bar.
“Dana,” repeated Tabitha, clicking through the cell phone’s contacts library to arrive at the athlete’s name.
“Helena,” said Alice, plunking her glass down again by making it do a strange and slow side to side dance on the bar.
“Helena?” said Tabitha, frowning now and looking up at Alice. “Your girlfriend is Helena? That’s who you want me to call?”
“Dana is my girlfriend too,” Alice revealed, a huge smile forming
before it wavered and she dropped her head to the bar. “Dana and
Helena… Helena and Dana… Dalana… Helane…”
Right around this time Tabitha supposed she should have paid closer
attention to Alice when she came in but the blonde had said she didn’t
want to talk. And she wasn’t the type to press someone when they wanted
to simply be. Especially when the person was more of a casual friend as
she considered Alice. Though she would admit she was suddenly curious
about the multiple girlfriend Dalana and Helane situation.
“How about this,” drawled Tabitha in humorous tones, smirking at Alice
who peered up from where she rested her head on her folded arms. “I’ll
call them both and whoever gets here first can have you.”
“I’m a prize!” Alice declared, punching her arm upwards in a victorious gesture.
Shaking her head affectionately and pressing the call button as she
clicked on Dana’s name, deciding to call her first, Tabitha replied,
“You sure are.”
Thirteen minutes and fifty two seconds later, Dana Fairbanks made her
grand entrance into The Palms with a loud bang of the door and several
interested eyes locking on her figure. The tennis player was dressed in
workout gear that consisted of tight black running pants, navy blue
tank top, and a pair of Fila sneakers. Either the signs of her workout
or her concern over Alice showed on her body through the popping veins
and the messy disarray of her hair that was pulled back in a ponytail.
Her blue eyes searched the bar decisively before spotting the
journalist and a natural smile lit up her features beautifully.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!