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Alice didn’t notice her entrance though, she was too busy as she was
still singing along with the jukebox. Only this time she had found a
far nicer song to accompany. “That’s the time I feel like making love
to you,” she managed to sing the happily romantic lyrics perfectly,
despite her obviously inebriated state. “That’s the time I feel like
making dreams come true.”
The smile firmly on her face now, Dana couldn’t help but feel good
about this despite the fact Alice was clearly drunk. After all, she had
been the person that the blonde had told Tabitha to call, not Helena
Peabody. And here Alice was, singing an utterly sweet and pretty love
song upon her arrival.
These things surely meant something good. That Alice loved her more
than Helena, that the decision would be happening very soon and it
would be in her favor. At least, that’s what Dana was desperately
praying for. If the outcome should prove different she wasn’t sure what
she would do. Perhaps come to The Palms and put back a few too many
drinks herself.
Not that she was going to worry about that at the moment. She had far
more important things to deal with. Such as taking care of Alice.
Walking up the blonde and pressing a gentle hand to the small of her
back, Dana whispered in her ear, “Who are you singing for? I hope it’s
me.”
Swiveling in her seat and wearing a huge smile on her face, Alice
wrapped Dana up in a clumsy hug. “It’s Dana!” she squeaked happily,
rocking the tennis player to and fro.
“Yeah, it’s me,” Dana chuckled softly, returning the hug and breathing
in the scent of the odd chocolate chip shampoo the writer had recently
discovered. When she pulled back, she smiled affectionately and pushed
at a stray lock of hair. “What sort of trouble have you been finding
yourself in this time?”
“I
never find trouble,” said Alice somberly, squinting and staring up at
Dana. “Trouble finds me and it uses the GPS in my mini to do so.”
Chuckling again, Dana started to reply but stopped when she saw Alice’s
brown eyes fix on something over her shoulder as her smile got much
brighter and her expression more alive. And before she even thought of
turning around, Dana somehow knew just who had walked through the
entrance to The Palms.
That
didn’t mean she didn’t scowl and get upset at the sight of Helena
Peabody gracefully winding through the myriad of tiny tables to make
her way towards them. Looking at Tabitha with accusing eyes, Dana
asked, “Why did you call her?”
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!