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Unavoidable.
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The mental slap that I caught was a hard one as she mentioned the problems at work she had with Jodi…
I felt my face wrench with anger, righteous anger at myself and not so righteous anger at her.
I loved her so much it hurted…
I’d told her what I thought and hung up, not able to hear her voice without my heart squeezing painfully in my chest…
I remember, stupidly, looking at my phone in utter disbelieve, as if it had promised me something it hadn’t been able to fulfill.
The rest of the day had gone by in a blur, the stupid preparations of Jenny’s party, the meetings, the supervising of the schedules… I had just only made it in time for the socalled festivities to start, and felt the nerves running through me with the speed of light… This was one of those things where I knew beforehand that she would be there, and it made my heart quiver with the opposite emotions of fear and longing.
I had felt her enter, and avoided, yet again, to glance in her direction. Her eyes were burning on me, and I wondered if her body was as aware of my presence as mine was of hers, as if her gaze just charged it with electricity, as if only her proximity made me alive…
I sensed her approach and fought the urge to turn around and move in the opposite direction. My body was doing the strangest thing, wiggling around on one place, kind of swaying on the music in a movement between staying and running away…
‘Hey’
My skin prickled with the nearness of her, and my voice trembled as I answered her…
‘Hi’
She walked past me, and the hairs in the back of my neck stood up. I glanced aside and my eyes met hers just as she send me that killer smile that had one me over the first time I had ever seen her…
God, that woman was so beautifull…
She thanked me and practicly apoligized for the phonecall, and I felt the anger I had felt before melt away… So many things had changed about her… Not that she had been inconsiderate, but the way she seemed now, so naturally, to know when something had caused someone an effort, and the way she could make, even the tiniest thing, the smallest ‘thank you’, sound so sincere…
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You did a beautiful job showing Tina’s thoughts and emotions bouncing back in forth between hope and despair. And then there is Bette waiting for Tina to wake up so she can tell her the truth.
Beautiful ending
Awesome!Thanks for taking your time, as this was beautiful. Except for having no reason for OMFG2 and OMFG3 in last nights episode I would prefer it having worked out this way. Look forward to your next post.
Doesn’t matter if this was late, it was wonderful to read. Your perspective is unique and helps fill in all those spaces we don’t get with IC. Thanks!
Loved the chapter. You have given us the feelings and words from our girls that IC failed to give. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us. Love it. Please continue to post “afters” for us.
Thank for taking time to post this story. I know that your time is limited so that makes the story even more amazing. I love how you bring out Tina’s emotions as she fights to not lose everything that is willing to come up as she finds her equilibrium.
Your writing and this story are soooo good. Absolutely awesome.
yea!!!!! you did it you did it! looking around… am i first? i think sooooo happy dancing!!! I think this story is so good, maybe IC should ask you to write some episode ;) just it will take a little ;) Good to read your post my friend and thanks so much for everything and your support during this hard time. Love ya
aaaawwww what a nice way to ‘endure’ a hangover. nicely written.
Hey JustLoveB+T, How wonderful to read how Tina’s sleep-over could have played out. Bette does love Jodi but her connection to Tina is a force of nature. It is primeval and passionate. Good to see that Bette and Jodi realized this before Tina woke up. Now if only this had been the start of Episode 5-06. From your fingers to IC’s eyes. Love it. Please continue your wonderful way with wordds soon. Much joy and appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Youre back, this is great! Any chance u’ll be posting a new chapie on pretty woman anytime soon? please?
“Why the hell did my heart keep forgetting, for split seconds, that she wasn’t mine anymore?” So beautiful. Took my breath away.
Your stories are always so beautiful..**sigh**…I always smile when I see a new post from you! Let’s hope IC is taking notes!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts on how this could have played out on the show. Again, this was simply beautiful!
nice one…
Damn that was awesome and love it. Thanks!
Ohh yes – that was what we wantet in the first place – wish that would have happend in the episode – but us B & T fans have hope and we are stickint to it as well – it’s looks promising in season 5 so far ;O))) – post soon
It shouldve went this way, but someone, I wont mention the name, was determined to have drama…damn tina looked like she wanted to pass out when Bette said she was in love with Jodi, Bette always could make Tina swoon