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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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You think im not, you should have told me she gave you her number in the first place.
Tina hoped up and went into her room, while Bette followed, Are we threw with this nonsense conversation Tina, cause I would truly like to get some sleep now,
Tina began to undress and nodded her head, not sure if she was threw. Bette sighed in thanks, So which one of us is going to take that Chicken Alfredo over?
Tina pointed at her, Figures.
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Shane was now on her way back from the airport with Mr. and Mrs. Schecter, who where oddly verbal. Shane had to answer many questions from them both.
Um, no mame, im not a guy, and neither is Sly.
Sly, what kind of name is that anyway, Jenny sure picks weird people to date. Mr. Schecter, fiddled with his glasses and snorted, Shes a *****, shes suppose to date weird people.
Shane kept her hands firmly on the wheel as they went off talking more about Jenny.
Dont say that Cren, shes confused is all, im sure that this is a faze. Mari shook her finger, he only rolled his eyes, Our daughter isnt going threw a faze, this is real Mari, Cren talked with his strong accent.
Shane, laughed to her self as the couple fought.
Think what you want, but my daughter is only confused and I will prove it tonight.
He huffed in response and made the sign of the cross over his chest.
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Sly was caught giving Chris a nuggy for wrestling with the dog, Jenny yawned and stretched as she ordered both to behave, she spoke to Sly as Shane pulled up, No pulling out now. Jenny cleaned up a bit
Do I ever pull out. Jenny smiled and flipped her off, Sometimes I wonder.
Sly crept back into the kitchen, and meet up with Carmen and Marina, Hit me up with that bottle. Carmen tossed her a Heineken and watched as she guzzled it all down.
Marina took one and headed out the door, Dont worry Sly, youll do great.
Carmen reassured her as well, My mom liked Shane and im pretty sure that if her mom doesnt like you, her dad will.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!