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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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Jenny was shaky and concerned, where had Sly gone, Carmen was already on her way back with some beverages, and Shane had just left to pick her mom and dad up.
After nearly losing her mind after catching a streaking Chris, she decided to get a bit of sleep on the couch, The front door opened and Marina was standing over her, Brought a latte for Sly, she called me to deliver her one, shes not fully awake yet.
She silently thanked Marina and went back to sleep. Sly came threw as planned and crept in quietly, not to disturb Jenny and grabbed the latte.
Extra caffeine for you, Marina smirked and sat down at the dinning table. I also got that other thing you asked for.
Marina pulled out another pill bottle and handed it to her, Sly arched a brow, ViagraMarina I was joking.
Not to my standards, you made the bet, so you have to suffer the consciences. Sly growled and hid the bottle until it was time for its use.
Im never watching another boxing match with you again.
Im that good.
We never speak a word about this got it.
Youre the boss.
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Bette avoided Tina as she kept a large amount of space between the, luckily the couch was in the way, Tina calmed herself and continued with her questioning, I pray to god Bette, that you wouldnt go out and do something as stupid as sleeping around when you know we have a daughter now, what am I not good enough again.
Tina, what do I care that she gave me her cell number, it doesnt matter, she has her own girlfriend, and company what does she need with me.
You tell me, she gave you her number for a reason, maybelunch. She chunked a pillow at Bette, who didnt dodge it in time.
HeyTina seriously, your over reacting, maybe she wants to have lunch but I would decline unless you where their as well.
You would love that wouldnt you, so you can prove to her and all that *****, that you can get me anytime, huh!
Bette cooled down just a tad, and ordered Tina to sit down. Sit!
Tina did so without another word, Bette stood in front of her, I dont have to prove anything to anybody, got that, I told you its nothing, nothing, if it was I would have told you, and just as Sly said, you would overreact, and we would be arguing, im to tired and old for that.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!