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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
Bette had been very supportive of her decision to go for a water birth this time, and Dr Wilson had given her qualified approval. Today’s final check up would be the clincher. Tina was pretty confident all would be fine. Apart from today’s lethargy, she had been feeling really great. Considering all she had gone through in the last 9 months, the pregnancy had been remarkably trouble free, however, Tina did not want to tempt fate by actually saying that to herself, let alone anyone else.
“It’s one of those ones you have to put together yourself, but it can’t be too hard can it? I mean it’s just like a big paddling pool.” Bette looked so thrilled, Tina didn’t have the heart to remind her of her lack of practical spatial skills. When it came to putting up shelves or assembling furniture, Bette was an expert – at hiring someone else to do it!
“OK, well let me just get dressed and we can go and check it out,” Tina said over her shoulder as she made her way to her bedroom.
The huge box took up a large proportion of the living room, and was impossible to ignore as they entered the house.
“I had them put it in here,” said Bette, rushing to open the box.
Tina joined her and looked down at the various bits and pieces that looked absolutely noting like a birthing tank. There was going to be more work involved in getting this thing set up than they had expected. Bette stared in horror at all the items packed tightly into the very large box, wondering if this had been such a good idea.
“Right this minute, I’m hating being a *****,” Bette announced looking at all the parts that would require assembling.
Tina moved to the sofa and sat down.
“Well, I know some lesbians that are really good at putting things together,” Tina said jokingly. She was slightly surprised that had slipped out, that she was able to see the whole Candace thing as the dim and distant past, to be joked about.
Bette looked a little taken aback too for a moment, but Tina’s relaxed expression reassured her that this wasn’t a serious dig.
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.