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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
“No,” Tina interrupted a little more firmly. She paused and took a deep breath. “I want to move back into our house and I want to have our baby in our home.” Her voice broke for a moment. “I want all of us to have a home together.” She looked up at Bette, seeing the disbelieving joy gradually flood her face. That beautiful smile she loved so much spread across Bette’s face as comprehension of what Tina meant sank in.
Bette moved slowly towards her and sank down onto the sofa beside her. For a moment, they didn’t speak, they just sat smiling at each other.
“Really T? Are you sure this is what you want because I know I put all of this pressure on you last night”
“Bette, if you’d let me get a word in edgeways last night I would have told you then. I want this more than anything, for us to have another chance. I know we’ve made mistakes. Yes Bette, we,” she went on at Bette’s perplexed look. “I should have told you about the baby straight away, I knew how hard you took the miscarriage and I shut you out, did this without you. It was wrong of me to exclude you like that. We have to learn from the past but what’s important is the future, and I want to share that future with you. I still love you Bette, and I always will.” She reached for Bette’s hands, holding them loosely and trying to let Bette see the certainty in her eyes.
Tina had done a lot of soul searching over the past months, and amongst all the confusing emotions one thing stood out. She was in love with Bette Porter, and wanted to be with her. She would never again take her love for granted, and she knew they would have to work hard to maintain the trust and communication between them. There was no such thing as perfect, but she knew that Bette was her happiness.
She suddenly realized Bette hadn’t said anything for a while. Her mouth was opening and closing, but she couldn’t seem to work out what to say.
“Baby? Is that ok with you?” She asked, a trifle anxiously.
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.