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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
“Like carpenters?” She replied, raising her eyebrows, returning Tina’s teasing smile.
“Sorry,” Tina grinned, “that was a throwback.”
Bette’s heart leaped. If Tina could refer so casually to Candace, and still smile at her so sweetly, maybe she was ready to forgive her and give them another chance. She began to feel more optimistic.
“Well, maybe Davina can do it. She says that she makes a home visit about two days or so before the baby’s born.” Tina went on as she looked at the video that came with the pool. ‘Splash! Everything You Need to Know About Water Births But Were Afraid To Ask.’ The voucher for money off waterproof mascara made her smile.
“No,” Bette said determinedly, “I’m just going to do it as a matter of pride.” She began unpacking all the different parts. How could there be so many bits to it? Bette wished she had paid more attention when Tim had been converting that shed into Jenny’s writing studio instead of teasing him about his skills with a screwdriver. Shame he had moved away come to think of it, he could have been a useful neighbour right about now.
She looked at the unpacked items, rather worried. She let out a small laugh at the task ahead of her.
“So, that’s a birthing tank,” she said. Tina found herself studying her. Orange was not a colour Bette wore often, and very few women could carry it off, Tina thought. She looked gorgeous as always, but it was so much more that that, that made Bette Porter special. Looking at her, all determination and concentration, Tina knew this was her moment.
“Bette,” Tina’s soft voice cut into her construction thoughts. “I’m having a home birth.”
Bette expelled a breath, nodding at Tina’s certainty. “I’m sure Dr Wilson will think it’s safe. I mean, the baby’s healthy and you’re in great shape..”
“What I meant is I’m having a home birth, and I want to have it in my home.” Tina said intently.
Bette looked puzzled, “You meanyou want to give birth in your apartment because..”
“No” Tina said quietly
“Are you sure because I’ve got everything so well organized and I..
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.