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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 9 – THE TRAP

    Master: “aye sir”

    Suddenly there was a new change in conformation of the wormhole, and the portal to the Hellmouth returned to its original position.

    First Evil: “how many warriors have we lost?”

    General Wilkinson: “many, I estimate that half of what was left of our army has been destroyed”

    First Evil: “I think we have a traitor…, I’ll find out and the punishment will be atrocious”

    Master: “what are we going to do now?”

    First Evil: “we must continue with our plans, Glory, you have to go there, can you produce a personal portal?”

    Glory: “course I can, I’ll do my part”

    Saying that Glory vanished in the thin air taking some minions with her.

    First Evil: “Dr. Buckley, you need to give the gadget to Porter’s daughter, you need to infiltrate into their positions”

    Dr. Buckley: (trembling) “they will recognize me”

    First Evil: “only if you show yourself as they knew you…, let me give you a different appearance… ha-ha”

    Tianna Buckley made a horrible cry while covering her face with her two hands. Once she removed them from her face, the rest of the members of the closest commands of the First looked at her with a sign of disgust. She ran looking for a mirror, to see her face; she only felt a strong pain when the First pointed to her. In the mirror she saw a different face, not hers, the features were deformed, a wounded eye, indeed the orb was empty, and a deep scar close to her mouth, her hair was almost gone.

    Dr. Buckley: “what is this? Why you changed me? Give me back my face”

    First Evil: “you will show up in the wormhole with the gadget as if you were a living dead who ran away from here and you are looking for asylum, you give this to Porter’s daughter and I’ll give you your face back”

     

    Outside of New Los Angeles – 10:00 am. Same day

     

    A beautiful blonde is walking around the New L.A. streets that bordered the highway toward New Pasadena she had managed to produce a small portal and has arrived just a few minutes ago. She is followed by five hooded figures, her minions.

    Glory: “hmm, we need transportation”

    Comments

    1. Hey proteonomics, welcome back!

      Only one chapter left ????, wow didn’t expected that.

      I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter when they destroy the First Evil for good.

      Please don’t let Kit open that box, i don’t want her or everyone else disappear for good.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story proteonomics!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Yes, is only one chapter left and I hope to post it next week, but I also hope our lovely couple, if they survive, of course, will continue their adventures in the future.

      When I started writing the story, I, honestly, was expecting to finish it on last October, but several things came in the way, among them a big hurricane and consequently lot of work, but finally, we are here, in the verge of ending this adventure.

      Thank you so much, Bibi, for being such an excellent reader and commenter, you as other readers are the vital force of stories, because in my opinion, without readers stories would be only ideas, personal reflections, cathartic notes, isolated essays from our souls and minds.

      I’m honored that you read and comment on my stories.

      Thanks Bibi

      P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      Thank you for your kind words ????.

      But if you want me to continue to read your stories, you must let Bette and Tina survive this war, without Tibette in love and happy i will be devastated and crying my heart out ????.

      I would love to read about them when they are older like in Tina’s dream.

      Please, can you promise to a loyal reader that you will not harm Bette and Tina and not break my poor heart?

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