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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 9 – THE TRAP

    As an especial favor, Louise has allowed Kit to accompany Angus; the oldest Porter was very frightened by this decisive battle, and petitioned in the last board of the projects’ meeting, to go to the battlefront with Angus. The board of the projects gave her permission under the condition to her of being useful. So, Louise instructed her in the use of some devices and the manipulation of the smart probes; Kit also learned how to drive the combat cars, and this time she was going to drive one.

    When the evil forces approached the cabin, they received the unpleasant surprise of the attack by the probes, but most of the vamps hide and were safe. There were of course casualties in the First Evil side, but they still had strength.

    First Evil: “what’s happening…? Why Rossi’s people aren’t surrendering?”

    General Wilkins: “I don’t know sir”

    The evil army kept going toward the cabin, when they were close to the tents of the Scoobies, a convoy of combat f-cars appeared from nowhere and flew directly to them.  The armored vehicles activate a kind of reflector with a special luminous radiation, similar to the one in the luminous balls. Many of the uber-vamps were burned on their sites, other escaped returning to the Hellmouth. Liquid nitrogen was also released through small hoses attached to the lateral wings on the side of each car, killing a huge amount of demons. The evil forces were dispersed and were highly reduced by the counter-attack of the allies, and the First Evil was conscious of that.

    First Evil: “they are attacking us…, that is impossible; they are isolated… at least…, Master check the annexation”

    Master: “aye sir”

    First Evil: “there is something wrong, very wrong”

    General Wilkins: “what is sir?”

    First Evil: “they are fighting back as if they knew we were going to attack them…, and perhaps Caleb was correct and they closed the ten portals”

    Master: “Sir…, I can’t understand, Rossi’s headquarters are annexed but they are not isolated”

    First Evil: “what do you mean?”

    Master: “they are still attached to their planet, the only thing that changed is our proximity to their positions, which, by the way, is making us more vulnerable”

    First Evil: “restore the original configuration of the wormhole before they destroy us”

    Comments

    1. Hey proteonomics, welcome back!

      Only one chapter left ????, wow didn’t expected that.

      I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter when they destroy the First Evil for good.

      Please don’t let Kit open that box, i don’t want her or everyone else disappear for good.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story proteonomics!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Yes, is only one chapter left and I hope to post it next week, but I also hope our lovely couple, if they survive, of course, will continue their adventures in the future.

      When I started writing the story, I, honestly, was expecting to finish it on last October, but several things came in the way, among them a big hurricane and consequently lot of work, but finally, we are here, in the verge of ending this adventure.

      Thank you so much, Bibi, for being such an excellent reader and commenter, you as other readers are the vital force of stories, because in my opinion, without readers stories would be only ideas, personal reflections, cathartic notes, isolated essays from our souls and minds.

      I’m honored that you read and comment on my stories.

      Thanks Bibi

      P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      Thank you for your kind words ????.

      But if you want me to continue to read your stories, you must let Bette and Tina survive this war, without Tibette in love and happy i will be devastated and crying my heart out ????.

      I would love to read about them when they are older like in Tina’s dream.

      Please, can you promise to a loyal reader that you will not harm Bette and Tina and not break my poor heart?

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