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What If – 14 (A)
Alice: Sure.
Dana: Ten years is a long time to be with someone if you love her like you say you do why aren’t you two married?
Alice: [breathing in deeply]
Dana: [waits for her to answer]
Alice: It’s not like she hasn’t proposed— four times to be exact.
Dana: And all four times you’ve turned her down?
Alice: I’m not proud of myself but I find ways to manipulate the situation and come up with every excuse in the book to justify why I’m not ready.
Dana: That doesn’t sound fair.
Alice: She wants kids.
Dana: And you don’t?
Alice: I don’t know.
Dana: Since when!? [playfully looking around] Will the real Alice Pieszecki please stand up!? You used to love kids so now you don’t? What changed?
Alice: [not wanting to reveal the truth she lied] I don’t know.
Dana: You don’t know?
Alice: Yeah, I don’t know.
Dana: [from her tone she immediately knew she longer wanted to continue discussing the matter] I did not mean to pry, it’s just I used to feel that way.
Alice: Now, you don’t? How come you and Lara never married?
Dana: Were set to be married in the spring of next year.
Alice: [trying to hide the disappointment in her voice] Wow, I did not know that.
Dana: How could you it’s not like I’ve been broadcasting it to the world.
Alice: Are you ready?
Dana: Funny, if you would have asked me that a month ago I would have gave you a definite yes but now I’m not so sure.
Alice: Well, you’re a lot further than I am.
Dana: [takes another sip of her drink]
Alice: Since, you practically have one foot down the aisle maybe we should stop—-whatever this is.
Dana: And what is this?
Alice: [blushing]
Dana: [smiling back at her] Maybe we should give each other space?
Alice: Maybe.
Dana: Can I ask you another question?
Alice: What is this Alice trivia?
Dana: [laughs]
Alice: Let e’r rip!
Dana: Fast forward to present times your more mature, wiser, an older if things were different would you still choose to be with me?
Alice: [taken completely off guard by her question]
Dana: [realizing she made a mistake] I should’ve asked you that.
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Hi Skunk:
Very nice chapter, poor Bette, opening her mouth before using her brain, not a good thing to do.
Tasha has many possibilities, but she wants to make things work with Alice.
Wow, Dana was caught with her hands in the cookie jar; she and Alice are at a crossroad let’s see where they’ll go.
Thanks so much for this nice and funny chapter, I’ll read the update.
P