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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Cat: Great.
Walking down the hall passing the kitchen Cat followed behind her until they reached the bathroom. Lara flicking on the light steps aside allowing Cat to enter. Assessing the issue she removes the toilet cover and checks the pipes a few minutes later she turns to face her.
Cat: What do you want first the good news or the bad news?
Lara: Good news first?
Cat: The good news is this is a quick fix and I should be out of your hair in 15 minutes. Do you know what’s exactly clogging the toilet?
Lara: Yup, a Barbie doll wig.
Cat: [laughed causing Lara to smile]
Lara: My nieces what can I say gotta love them so what’s the bad news?
Cat: I think you’re pancakes are burning.
Lara: [sniffing the air she inhales a burnt smell quickly leaving the bathroom she run towards the kitchen] Guys what happened!?
Olivia: The pancake was done and when I——-.
Katherine: [cutting her off] It was not!
Olivia: It was too!
Katherine: No, it wasn’t!
Lara: Okay, hey….Olivia what happened? [she says turning of the burners on the stove while fanning away the smoke]
Katherine: Hey, why does she get to go first?
Lara: Once, I hear her side I will hear your side okay so Olivia what happened?
Olivia: I was about to scoop Jasmine onto the spatula to put her on the plate with the others when Katherine kept saying she wasn’t ready.
Katherine: Because she wasn’t!
Olivia: Jasmine was cooked on all sides!
Katherine: No she wasn’t!
Lara: Okay, Katherine why do you think she wasn’t ready?
Katherine: It wasn’t brown enough.
Lara: Brown enough?
Katherine: Yes brown.
Lara: [has a confused look on her face]
Katherine: [pointing to the plate with Cinderella and Belle on it] See, the pancakes are light because Cinderella and Belle are light Jasmine is not light so the pancake has to be brown.
Lara: [smiled at her innocence and so did Olivia now that she knew her reason for wanting to leave the pancake on the skillet for a while longer]
Katherine: I not did mean to burn her I just wanted it to look like the real Jasmine.
Lara: [walking over to open a window returns] Okay, how about we make Jasmine all over again this time with brown skin?
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.