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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Katherine & Olivia: [in unison] Auntie Lara & Cat kissing in the tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
Lara: What?
Olivia: The same look she was giving you is how John looks at me every day at school before he gives me his Little Debby oatmeal pie.
Lara: Looks at you how?
Olivia: Like he likes me.
Katherine: [sequencing up her face] Ewwwww boys are gross!
Lara: Listen, that is not what’s happening okay I’m with your Aunt Dana remember?
Olivia: I know that but do you?
Lara: [her young niece just threw subliminal shade leaving her speechless]
Olivia: [grabbing Katherines hand] Come on let’s finish those princess pancakes.
Watching them both walk through the door she stood there for a minute. Yes, she was still involved in a committed relationship with Dana, yes she was still madly in love with her, and yes she was the woman she wanted to spend the rest of her life with. Her accepting her invite was innocent I mean Cat similar to her was in the restaurant business too so her accepting her invite was completely innocent right? Or was it?
Bette and Tina house……….
Bette: [walking onto the patio] Hey everyone look what the cat drug in?
Kit: Well it’s about time!
Helena: [sarcastically] I’m sorry can someone remind me what time we were supposed to be here again?
Tina: I told everyone to be here before 1.
Helena: Huh, yeah that’s what I thought. [she says looking at her watch]
Shane: Oh, so you’re talking to me now?
Helena: No.
Shane: Oh, come on I didn’t think it mattered!
Helena: You didn’t think it mattered you sent me on a date with a nun? She looked like she just threw an abstinence party and nobody came! [everyone getting her joke laughs except Shane.]
Shane: [sighing in frustration] But she’s cute right?
Helena: [ignoring her stands up to give Alice a hug] Hey Al.
Alice: [returning the hug] Hey, why aren’t you speaking to Shane again?
Helena: She set me up on a blind date with a nun and now I have to attend mass on Sunday.
Alice: Oh, [she says turning to face Shane] I wouldn’t speak to you either.
Jenny: Hey my friends!
Shane & Alice in unison: [in a bland tone] Hey Jenny.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.