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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Katherine: Okay, [she says before turning to her sister] I’m sorry for making you burn Jasmine.
Olivia: [walking over hugs her] Its okay I’m sorry too.
Cat: Uh, hi sorry to interrupt. [everyone turns to look at her]
Lara: Oh, hey how’s everything?
Cat: Fine…..you’re all good to go.
Lara: Wow, that was quick!
Cat: [removing a small zip lock bag placing it on the counter] Well, luckily Barbies wig was synthetic. [she says smiling]
Lara: [laughing at her joke] I’m sorry I didn’t get a chance to offer you something to drink.
Cat: Oh, no worries.
Lara: [losing her train of thought stares at her]
Olivia & Katherine: [noticing the exchange giggle]
Cat: Okay, well I am going to leave the receipt here for your records.
Lara: Give me a second to grab my purse.
Cat: No need, payment has already been rendered by a Mrs. Lesley Perkins-Johnson.
Lara: Ah, yes of course big sis always stays on top of things.
Katherine: You’re really pretty.
Olivia: [playfully nudges her]
Katherine: [whispering] But she is.
Cat: [flattered by the compliment] Thank you but I’m not as cute as you are.
Katherine: [blushed in response]
Cat: [clutching her work bag] Well, I hope you all enjoy your princess pancakes.
Katherine: [waving] Bye.
Walking towards the door with Lara following behind her she lets herself out before taking a step outside she turns around.
Cat: Uh, if you don’t have any——[she stops cutting herself off] you know what never mind.
Lara: No, what were you going to say?
Cat: My bed and breakfast is located off 15 Street and Wilshire I mean it’s not much but the locals make it feel like home if you’re not too busy I wanted to invite you to come and check it out I mean if you want.
Lara: I have a pretty tight schedule the next couple of days.
Cat: Of course, I understand well it was nice meeting you and the best of luck to you.
Lara: I’m free tomorrow morning at 9:00.
Cat: [smiles]
Lara: Normally, at that time I’ve worked up an appetite.
Cat: Great, well I’ll see you then!
Lara: Tomorrow at 9.
Cat: [smiling] Enjoy the rest of your morning.
Lara: You too. [watching her drive off she remained until her van disappeared down the drive way when she turned around she was surprised to see her nieces standing in the doorway staring at her.] What are you two doing?
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.