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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Tina: [breathing heavily] This does not change the——-.
Bette: I love you.
Tina: Bette, I love you too but —–.
Bette: [cutting her off in a serious tone] Shut up.
Tina: Excuse me!?
Bette: I said shut up.
Tina: [insulted tries to pull away from her unsuccessfully]
Bette: [gently tightens her grip] Look at me.
Tina: [reluctantly does as she was told]
Bette: [staring into her eyes finally gaining her full undivided attention] I need for you to shut up and listen.
Tina: [hearing the seriousness in her tone finally does just that]
Bette: I love you. [she paused before continuing to speak] Don’t just hear me I need for you to feel and understand how much I love you.
Tina: [hearing the seriousness in her tone stares longingly into her eyes]
Bette: You’re right this is my dream job and not taking it I will regret it. I took a vow to always love you not for the rest of your life but for the rest of mines. My dream job is no longer a dream if I don’t have you to share it with. My biggest fear and worry is being away from you and us growing apart as a result of the distance for me no fucking job on planet Earth or the universe is worth losing you over. Do you understand?
Tina: [fighting back the tears] Bette I——-.
Bette: [embracing the mood softly sings] I love you/ I love you/Honey, I love you/ I do/ More than you ever know/ It’s for sure you can always count on my love/ Forevermore.
Tina: [in a loving tone] Patti Labelle Love, Need and Want You.
Bette: Oh, I want you, I want you sugar/ I want you so bad/ I got a burning desire, my soul’s on fire/ Can’t you see you are my everything.
Tina: [smiling at her] You sound like shit.
Bette: [returning her smile] I know but I’ll sound like shit any day of the week for you.
Tina: [now caressing the side of her face] Baby, I’m not going anywhere.
Bette: [now tearing up] Tell me again.
Tina: [lovingly stares at her]
Bette: I need to hear you say it. Say you’ll be here waiting for me. If I take this job I need to hear you say it assure me we’ll be okay.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.