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When You Least Expect it – Chapter 18
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“But-” Kevin swayed so hard he lost his footing, stumbling back a few steps before he was able to correct himself. “What’s .. Bette got that I don’t? D-don’t you miss mmme?”
His words were getting harder to understand and Tina found herself growing more impatient. She sighed, both frustrated and disappointed with the turn of events. She had actually thought Kevin was interested in being on friendly terms with her, his nice and considerate behavior as of late had obviously been nothing more than a ruse.
He had tried to manipulate her as he had always done to her in the past and Tina couldn’t help but want to kick herself for falling for such a played out trick. She mourned the loss for her daughter, knowing that her baby girl would experience the stress and hardships of having estranged parents.
“I don’t Kevin. Like I said, it’s over. Now, you need to go. I’ll call to schedule a time where you can come see Angie. Other than that I need you to leave”
Having watched the exchange, the cab driver exited his car and cautiously approached the porch. “Is everything alright ma’am?”
At that moment, Kevin’s legs finally gave out and he stumbled backwards to crash against the wooden railing surrounding the porch. He groaned in pain.
“Can you please just take him home?” Tina sighed as she pinched the bridge of her nose. She looked up to watch as the cab driver managed to lift Kevin onto his feet before dragging him to the car.
With another sigh, Tina turned and reentered the house.
“Who was that?” Bette asked as Tina shut the door, causing the blonde to jump.
“Jesus! You scared me”
Bette chuckled as she made her way over to her girlfriend, “Sorry. What has you so jumpy?”
“Just some drunk guy. He had the wrong house” Tina waved a hand dismissively, the lie immediately filling her with guilt. Bette had already stated her reservations about her weekly lunches with Kevin and the last thing Tina wanted to do was to bring those fears to life, despite the fact that she didn’t reciprocate his feelings.
Bette glanced over her girlfriend’s shoulder, looking to the closed door with concern before resting her eyes back on the beautiful blonde. “Is he gone now?”
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Hi Liah,
Sorry to read that you were sick, i hope you recover soon, your health is more important, so take good care of your self.
About the chapter, Kevin is a nasty piece of ass.
I don’t understand why Tina didn’t tell the truth who was at the door.
Happy to see them in love.
Yeah, new chapter, thank you!
I comment later, when i read it.
Hi! Thanks for the chapter and i hope soon you will be feeling better!
I understand why Tina tried be friends with Kevin, but i think she need to stop be so naive about him. She alredy understand it, after his drunk appearance, but maybe it’s too late – he’s already made his plans about Angelica.
Waiting for the next!
I think that Kevin, how stupid he is, understand that no judge gives him custody of Angelica. So i think he might to try another, illegal way to take Ange.
Thanks for the post. Sorry you’ve not been well. Please look after yourself.
I really do not like. Kevin and wish. Tina would wise up to him and stop being so ‘nice’.
Look forward to your next post.
SG
Glad you’re doing well and feeling better. I would feel better if Kevin was eliminated permanently!
Wow what an ass but typical. Been there. But as mind did im sure he will be put in his place. Hope he doesn’t do something stupid. Well looks like he might. Lol great chapter hope your feeling better.
That DAMN KEVIN…I knew he was gonna be trouble!
So glad Tina got wise to his lil game to win her back. After ABANDONING Tina and Angie and having NO RELATIONSHIP with his child, I can’t see a Court giving him any rights…he would have to have supervise visitation at best.
I love the way Tina Reassured Bette that she is her ONE AND ONLY!!!
Great birthday dinner with the Bracelet and the understanding that a proposal is coming one day…cute! I wished she would have told Bette about Kevin showing up drunk and looking to reconcile, but I understand NOT wanting to ruin their time together after a tough couple of weeks. I know Bette is gonna lose it when she finds out what Kevin is up to. She is very protective of Tina and Angie!
Glad you are feeling better, I had bronchitis in December it is hard on the body…the coughing alone make you so tired and sore. Take care and take all your antibiotics!
Look forward to the next update.
Hi! How is your health?
I nor rush you, but still waiting for the next chapter)
Ugh. Kevin is grinding my gears lol! I wish he’d just disappear and let Bette take over as the second parent role officially. Seems as if she has anyway. Ohhhh and I hope that’s a foreshadowing of a soon-to-be proposal! Love your stories. :)
Hi..sorry to hear about your trouble with your health..wish you could feel better soon..
I first read your story “come over” and That one story is enough to make me want to read all of ur stories, and finally finished reading all of it.. :)
You are a wonderful writer and i love all of ur work..
Any chance u would make a sequel out of “as good as it gets” and continue with “never say never”? I am curious what kind of life does Tibette have with Tina become a famous singer and bette as a famous producer in as good as it gets or how Tina could finally fall in love with bette in never say never…i have to say from all of Tibette’s stories that i’ve read only in never say never Tina and Alice was sister.. and it’s quit refreshing..:D
Keep up the good work and stay healthy..