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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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It was unfortunate that her head thought otherwise, her stubborn nature winning over all else.
“Well, I guess we’ll never know if it would have changed anything”
Tina was completely taken aback at Bette’s response, unable to do anything else as the brunette moved to grab her car keys. She wanted to ask where Bette was going but all her words were stuck in her throat, the world around her feeling as though it was closing in.
It was Kit who found her voice to ask, receiving an immediate yet angry response from the brunette as she stormed out of the house.
“To find our daughter!”
Kit looked to Jan who seemed just as helpless as she was, “Go after her”
Without a word, the blonde ran after her best friend leaving Kit with a heartbroken Tina.
***
“She won’t stop crying”
“Because you stole her from her mothers”
“Mother” Kevin growled, squeezing the steering wheel so tight he thought he would snap it in two. “She only has one”
“If you say so”
Kevin clenched and unclenched his jaw at the sound of his mother’s words spilling through the car speaker. He glanced at Angelica’s distraught form in the rearview mirror, upset that the little girl had not stopped crying since she had awoken. He was angry that the baby girl didn’t feel comfortable in his presence, even more so when he spied the blanket she desperately hung onto.
The crocheted piece was covered with various designs, giving it an elegant and artistic feel. It was pretty that much Kevin could admit but he knew from Tina that it had once belonged to Bette when she was a child, causing him to hate it by default. He had tried to part Angie with the blanket, trying even to substitute it with a stuffed animal he had bought specifically for the toddler but Angie refused. A fact that filled Kevin with frustration.
He couldn’t wait for the day that his daughter would completely forget about Bette entirely, his plan to remove her from Angelica’s memory would be set into motion the moment they reached their destination. Starting with that damn blanket.
“I’ll never acknowledge that bitch as Angie’s mother” He growled again as he focused on the road, eager to reach the airport.
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!