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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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“You know you’re going to get charged for kidnapping if you get caught” Kevin’s mother spoke, ignoring his previous statement. “You took that girl from her mother without permission”
“If I get caught which I won’t happen because you’re not going to say anything. Before anyone realizes anything, we’ll be at your house in Georgia. No one will think to look for us there”
“You don’t think so?” There was a smug tone to his mother’s voice and Kevin found he didn’t like it, “I’m your mother. This will be the first place they’ll look”
“Yeah and we’ll hide while you lie for us because if not, I’ll take a flight somewhere else and you’ll never see me or Angie again”
There was a sigh on the other line and right then Kevin knew that his mother would protect both him and his secret. Whether he was in the right or wrong, his mother wouldn’t say a word. He was sure of it.
“When is your flight?”
Kevin glanced over at the digital clock on the dashboard, “An hour. I’m almost to the airport”
“How are you planning to travel with her?” The lack of support from his mother’s end was rather unnerving and Kevin found his irritation increasing, “You need signed documents from the absent parent to travel with a child”
“Don’t worry about it” Kevin snapped as he glanced to the passenger seat and the forged documents that occupied the space there. “I got it handled”
Another sigh crackled over the speaker, this one heavier than the last. “What is your flight information? I want to meet you both at the airport”
***
Melissa Harris glanced at her buzzing phone as she quickly made her way down the terminal, rushing to catch her connecting flight. She read the alert for a child taken without permission from her mother, the text causing Melissa’s heart to drop. She said a silent prayer for the young child, hoping that she would soon be reunited by her mother. Glancing up in time to avoid colliding with another person, Melissa wheeled around him and made a beeline for her gate. Her thoughts remained on the kidnapped child, hating just how dark the world was. She couldn’t believe the type of person who would just take a child and hoped by some miracle she would see the bastard who did such a thing.
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!