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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 20
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As luck would have it, Melissa was nearly mowed down from behind by someone who was obviously more in a rush than she was.
“Excuse you” She growled at the man who whooshed passed her, a crying baby in his arms.
Without bothering to utter any apologies, the man continued onto his destination which just so happened to be the same flight Melissa was headed for. The raven haired beauty righted herself as she watched the man, the distressed baby girl bouncing in his arms. Her eyebrows knitted together as she took in the sight, her gaze catching on the blanket the little girl held onto.
It was familiar yet something Melissa couldn’t quite place, the thought nagging at her. She arrived at the gate shortly after the man had been granted access, watching as he made his way to the plane while roughly shushing the baby in his arms. She shook her head at his excellent parenting skills just before the child raised her head to peer over her father’s shoulder, their eyes meeting for the most heartbreaking moment.
Instantly Melissa felt that something was wrong, the frightened expression on such a small child could only mean one thing. Help.
“Ma’am?” The gate attendant snapped Melissa out of her reverie causing her to jump and gain her attention. She had been in the process of handing over her boarding pass when she stopped to watch the man and child, her hand hovering in midair with the boarding pass in hand.
“Oh, sorry” Melissa smiled apologetically as she handed over the thin paper along with her identification, glancing once more at the man before he disappeared from sight. She definitely felt as if something was wrong with the sight but urged herself not to jump to conclusions, the alert she received on her phone obviously influencing her thoughts. Maybe things weren’t as they had seemed, her desire to find the kidnapped child blinding her from thinking rationally.
She forced herself to think realistically. What were the odds she would come across the person currently wanted by the police?
Thanking the gate attendant, she reclaimed her things and made her way toward the plane. All the while she couldn’t get that baby girl’s image out of her mind, those large tears having more of an effect that Melissa could have imagined.
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Way to go Tina! Glad it was a good punch, enough to knock out a filling. Bette was an ass towards Tina. Yes Tina should have told her but could she wait until a less stressful time. Thanks to both Melissa and Kevin’s mom. Can’t wait to see what happens between Jan and Melissa inthe next episode . Good chapter.
Great Chapter, loved it!
Went through all the gambits of emotion and enjoyed them all!
So glad you didn’t leave us on a cliff hanger, thanks.
Bette was an ass, Tina was a bad ass!
Look forward to the next post
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
Yeah, Bette was completely jerk in this part, but i’m glad that they found Angel and made up.
Waiting for the final part!
I was putting together a bookcase when I randomly decided to see if you posted and boy was I happy you did. I put off my little project until I finished reading. So glad that Bette and Tina got past the hiccup in the beginning. Even happier that they got their baby girl back. To finally hear Bette claim Angie as her daughter was so sweet, then she called her momma. Wow! Hope the last chapter gives them the happy ending they deserve. I love your stories. Thank you for the update!
Bette said her criticle, extremely vicious words to Tina out of fear & pain, but she still said ’em!!! Tina needs to tell Bette how HER wrds impacted her!!
Wasn’t it Tina who wanted to call home several times during the course of the evening because she felt something was “wrong” but Bette told her to chill?
Yeah, you right about that.
If it were me, after having my baby kidnapped and almost losing my gf, I wouldn’t focus on “who said what”. I’d just be grateful to have them in my arms again. Hurt people hurt people, but that doesn’t make it right. So they immediately apologized to each other once they reunited with baby Angie. Tina knows her partner well enough to know she didn’t truly mean it. And once again, Bette apologized. For a woman who’s known to be wrapped up in herself and typically oblivious to what’s around her— that’s progress. Heck even Tina is a little passive-aggressive. I’m proud they worked through it in their own way. ✨
Bette was too hard to Tina, but i glad they made up.
And bye-bye Kevin, we don’t miss you!
Whew….so glad they got Angie back from the bastard Kevin! Way to Melissa and Kevin’s Mom for stopping CRAZY from prevailing! Bette was scared and worried about Angie, BUT saying those things to Tina….It’s your FAULT were FOUL. And Tina lying to Bette and not telling her about Kevin’s drunken intention the night of your BDay dinner was FOUL too. So glad they made up and apologized and ANGIE CALLED BETTE, MAMA!
Bye-Bye Kevin, Tina got a good punch in on that jerk…I wished it would have been Bette! Hate to see this story end. Thanks for the update.
One more to go…huh! :)
Great chapter as always. Loved your story I know yiu have one more but thank you it was very well written and full of love.. glad it all worked out and glad kevins mom is not a bad person like him.
Thank god that that Angie is back in her mothers arms!
Kevin’s mother has a good heart and seems to accept that Angie has two mothers, that is why she called the police, thanks to her and Melissa Angie was soon back.
In fear and stress situations people, Bette, say things they don’t mean and i am so happy that Tina and her made up immediately at the airport.
Glad that there will be one more chapter!