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Wings of an Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 9
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Tina’s eyes are showing a picturesque testimony of her worst nightmare; losing Bette. “Please, don’t go to work today”. Bette’s face shadowed her confusion and, for the first time in their relationship, could not understand Tina’s uneasiness; this was a dimension of Tina she had yet to see. Bette was compelled to ask again, “Tina, what is wrong. You’re not making any sense”. As Tina rotated her hands so that their palms were now clasping, she whispered, “I have this bad feeling that I am going to lose you; that the moment you walk out that door, you won’t return to me”. Bette was perplexed for she had never observed the overwhelming psychic ability of watching her own death within Tina’s vision. Bette was actually conscious of her body temperature dropping below zero degrees; tempting her thriving soul to follow into the bleak and dark chartered waters of the undiscovered. ‘Breathe Bette . . . breathe’ her subconscious repeated in ten second intervals in her head for she was losing oxygen, she was stuck in a time warp that was spinning faster and faster out of control. With as much strength Bette tried to portray, she found herself not being able to stop; not being able to conquer the invisible hands that kept drawing her back under. Bette inhaled deeply until her lungs were full and upon extraction slowly released her anxiety along with it.
Bette stared death in the eye and stated with intense conviction, “T, we both must realize that the time we have together is not guaranteed and that we have to live our lives as if each day was our last. I don’t know when my journey is meant to end, but I can tell you this . . . it won’t be today”. Bette reiterated again to chase the demon still aiming to anchor the horror within Tina’s mind, “Baby, it won’t be today”. Tina glanced at Bette with scared features still written all over her face for she couldn’t vanquish the feeling that something terrible was going to happen, regardless of Bette’s vow. “I love you. I can’t handle the thought of losing you. Promise me that you won’t leave me”. Bette would do anything to erase the worried fear etched in Tina’s soul. “I love you Tina. I promise that I won’t ever let you go. I pledge my heart to you; therefore leaving you is not an option”. Tina felt drained from the emotional trial that she was going through and excused herself from the table, but only after kissing the lips that have brought fundamental happiness into her life and whispering the words “Just be careful”. Bette continued to sit immobilized in her chair; as the nightmare she saw in Tina’s eyes caused nervous dread to slither into her entire being. Bette willed her tongue to trace the taste of Tina; to taste the sweet mystical nectar of her beloved’s imperial flavor. After several minutes of composing herself, and praying for a blessing, Bette left the house repeating three little, but powerful words, “Just be careful”.
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k babe. i said i loved your story but not this. just kidding. still loving this but this kind of drama on the second day of the new year???!!! make it better please. thanks.
OMG….f*ck that was tense…OMG. I have missed your story Leo and then you pull this on us. WOW – that was breathtaking…do post very soon and I mean soon Leo
So sorry to hear about everything happening. My condolences to you and your family. However, I’m glad that you are back. Really loved this chapter…I have faith in you. ;-) Oh, and as for 30…it’s just a number. Thanks for posting and welcome back.
no, you didn’t just do it…talking about drama…it better be happy ending or else
Great chapter and story. Looking forward to more.
Let’s hope that “Wings of an Angel” means that an angel came down to save the lives of Bette and Kyle and she’s not harmed in a major way!!!
Damn this is good and please don’t let anything happen to Bette and don’ tlet her die. Ok post soon please, thanks!
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!what have you done????
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! have u lost your freaking mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fix it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you did not do this to me
My condolances to you and your family, When the person you love is in danger you have feeling that you cant put your finger on. Mybe the Angels are looking out for our Bette and the little boy. thanks for a wonderful story///
Glad that you are back. I hope that Bette survives this accident. Please let her be okay.
I was just thinking about you today and look what happen…LOL….Glad you are back….Now let me go back and read..later!
Hooolly shit!!!!! Bette has got to be nuts I would have knocked that kids ass out and drag him to safety. Now I can only hope that your not doing the Ghost scenario and Bette is still alive but since the story is entitled Wings of an Angel I don’t have much hope otherwise.
oh noooooooooooooooo..!!!
That was really gripping by the way lul us into a false sense of peace put a little scare into us and then smack us full in the face. Brilliant!!!!
please post immediately.. this is a very interesting story..
I hope Bette is save and please post soon.
OH NO… now you had better have the next chapter all ready to post…i hope bette is safe… see tina should have tied her to the bed… please post soon
oh no, pls, pls do not leave us like this………………………….
I finally got finished with your story up to this point. All of it is so intense I swear it’s like being in a marathon and I have to keep stopping so I can breathe. Obviously I am wishing for a happy ending and am sticking to my idea that Kyle is the angel mentioned in the title.
Hey you …. You still rock girl – thank you for posting. I am so very sorry to hear of you recent loss, my condolences to you. Have a happy and healthy new year.