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    Wings of an Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 9

    Story written on January 2, 2006 by Leo Paradise.
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    Just another love story from the beginning.

     

    Hamilton Harbor Construction Site

     

    It was 8:30 in the morning and the oppressive heat of the sun was already stamping its existence by acknowledging its presence with eighty degree weather, an explosive day to a new beginning.  Today marked the monumental celebration of breaking ground to inaugurate the construction of the Hamilton Harbor Condominium Waterfront Complex.  The waterfront district is Bette’s first major project since receiving her promotion and not only was there the excitement of being rewarded with this huge weight of responsibility; Bette was the only female architect present.  She had proven to herself and many others in this profession that women are just as good, or should I dare to say, women are actually better.  Bette smiled for she knew that many more were to come.

     

    “Hi John.  How are you?”  Bette greeted John, the junior manager, with ease and professional accord.  As they shook hands, Bette noticed that John was not looking at her, but surveying her surroundings; as if he was searching for something or someone else.  “Is Victoria not coming?  I was hoping to see her today; thought she might like to watch the dynamic show from the front row”.  Bette took in the young man’s appearance and had to admit to herself that John was good looking especially with that happy glint of sparkle in his deep blue eyes.  The only problem was his choice in women and Victoria was a bad choice.  Bette didn’t have the heart to tell him that Victoria was on vacation with some guy she met only three months prior.  Obviously, the attraction was one sided because John just didn’t have a clue.  “Victoria hasn’t been feeling well.  She is due to return to work early next week”.  The concern began to show in John’s eyes and before he could investigate any further Bette volunteered, “She’ll be fine John.  She just ate something that didn’t agree with her.  I will tell Victoria you asked about her”.

     

    The morning progressed with little disruption as there were no unnecessary changes warranted before the commencement of the demolishing project.  John and Bette had gone over the blue prints for the thousandth time to ensure that the dynamite was positioned at the agreed coordinates to assure a compact destruction of the building.  “It appears that everything is in order; should be smooth sailing from here.” Bette concluded.  John smiled with confidence and stated, “No worries Bette.  You choose the best team for the job”.  John couldn’t help but be conceited with the perfection of his company’s expertise.  Bette, on the other hand, always had this phobia that nothing was for certain until the last brick was laid to rest; there were no guarantees with this business.  Bette thought to herself, ‘There are no guarantees with life’.  For some reason, she couldn’t shake this feeling of disaster that suddenly overcame her; a feeling that her life, as she knows it, was held in the balance.  Bette couldn’t comprehend what was causing this dreaded prediction to snake its way into her spine, but she wasn’t one to ignore her instincts.  “John, are we absolutely sure that we didn’t miss anything”.  John sighed impatiently and stated, “Bette, we have gone through everything with a fine tooth comb.  There is nothing to concern ourselves with.  Just relax”.  The tone of John’s voice indicated that he wasn’t too thrilled of Bette second guessing his expertise; he was born for this, it was in his blood.  John dismissed Bette’s uneasiness with a smile while thinking to himself, ‘what does a woman know’.  Right at that moment, Bette disliked John’s arrogance and didn’t appreciate her misgivings being discharged because of her gender.  “It’s part of our job John to be sure, no matter what”.

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    1. k babe. i said i loved your story but not this. just kidding. still loving this but this kind of drama on the second day of the new year???!!! make it better please. thanks.

    2. OMG….f*ck that was tense…OMG. I have missed your story Leo and then you pull this on us. WOW – that was breathtaking…do post very soon and I mean soon Leo

    3. So sorry to hear about everything happening. My condolences to you and your family. However, I’m glad that you are back. Really loved this chapter…I have faith in you. ;-) Oh, and as for 30…it’s just a number. Thanks for posting and welcome back.

    6. Let’s hope that “Wings of an Angel” means that an angel came down to save the lives of Bette and Kyle and she’s not harmed in a major way!!!

    9. WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! have u lost your freaking mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fix it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you did not do this to me

    10. My condolances to you and your family, When the person you love is in danger you have feeling that you cant put your finger on. Mybe the Angels are looking out for our Bette and the little boy. thanks for a wonderful story///

    13. Hooolly shit!!!!! Bette has got to be nuts I would have knocked that kids ass out and drag him to safety. Now I can only hope that your not doing the Ghost scenario and Bette is still alive but since the story is entitled Wings of an Angel I don’t have much hope otherwise.

    15. That was really gripping by the way lul us into a false sense of peace put a little scare into us and then smack us full in the face. Brilliant!!!!

    18. OH NO… now you had better have the next chapter all ready to post…i hope bette is safe… see tina should have tied her to the bed… please post soon

    20. I finally got finished with your story up to this point. All of it is so intense I swear it’s like being in a marathon and I have to keep stopping so I can breathe. Obviously I am wishing for a happy ending and am sticking to my idea that Kyle is the angel mentioned in the title.

    21. Hey you …. You still rock girl – thank you for posting. I am so very sorry to hear of you recent loss, my condolences to you. Have a happy and healthy new year.

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