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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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"Well, I think I am gonna head out guys. Thanks for entertaining me." Jenny said with a laugh as she kissed the two on the cheek. "Would you tell the love birds I said goodnight?"
Both Shane and Alice nodded their heads in agreement.
"Soooooooooo, Pieszecki." Shane stated and then started laughing for no apparent reason.
"Soooooooooo, Yoda!" Alice replied and giggled as Shane nearly fell out of her chair.
"Ouch! That fucking hurt!" Shane said with a frown. She managed to make it back into her seat and leaned to one side so she could rub her sore ass.
"Awww…poor baby! Should I go get your woman so she can make it all better?" Alice slurred.
"Would you?" Shane said with a pout.
Just then Shane felt two arms snake around her waste and heard a familiar laugh in her ear. "Hi baby. Nice little spill you took." Carmen said with a smile.
"You saw that? These chairs suck, baby. Don’t sit in them!" Shane said in a serious tone. Bette and Tina had walked up just then to hear the conversation and they were all laughing at their skinny friend now.
"What’s so funny?" A familiar voice asked from behind them all.
"Dana! You made it! YAY!!! Dana is here everyone!" Shane said with glee. "My friend. Where have you been?" She pulled herself out of her seat and out of Carmen’s grasp to envelope Dana in an intoxicated hug. The end result was basically Dana holding her friend up and laughing as Bette and Carmen helped pry her off of her.
"Good to see you too Shane." She said with a smile.
"Hi Dane." It was said quietly, but Dana knew exactly who the voice belonged to. She turned and gave Alice a hesitant smile. She felt badly for avoiding her for the last week, but she didn’t see what else to do. It was simply too hard to be around her. It had taken all of her courage to come tonight, knowing that Alice would most likely be here.
"Hi Al." She responded equally as quiet.
"Guess what Dana!?!" Shane shouted. "Alice and I are shit faced!" Everyone laughed at this, including Dana.
"It’s true." Alice said with a silly grin.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x