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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    “Of course, I remember that night. The night that Tina unexpectedly called me and I took the Red-Eye home. I couldn’t attend the dinner. Peggy, your mother, wanted me to meet you?” Bette asked, astonished.

    “Yes, Bette. I suspect she knew all was not well with you and Tina, despite her pregnancy. Mothers have a way of knowing these things. And Winnie and I were going through a horrible separation,” I continued.

    “Go on,” Bette urged.

    “Bette, I was at the MONA that evening. When I saw you, I was totally enamored, mesmerized! I didn’t know Mother had such great taste in women. The moment I saw you, I fell completely head over heals for you. As I approached you to introduce myself, you totally brushed me off, casually saying, “It’s nice to see you. I’m sorry, I’m just leaving.’ You didn’t even give me a chance to get my name out.”

    “It seems I vaguely remember that. Helena, I didn’t know who you were. I didn‘t even know you were there at MONA that night,” Bette apologized.

    “It shouldn’t matter if you did, Bette. You were in a relationship, shaky as it was,” I replied.

    “How did your mother, or anyone else for that matter, know what was going on?” Bette asked. “I mean, with Tina. I was in the dark.”

    “Bette, when a couple gets pregnant, at least in my experience, there’s often a feeling that everything that was wrong in the relationship is suddenly going to be made right with this new life that’s about to come along. And, of course, that just very simply isn‘t true.” I explained, “Sometimes, the people closest to the painting only see the brush strokes. They can’t see the clear picture.”

    She hung her head in her hand.

    “Bette, please, I want to touch you, and I know I can’t right now. Do you really want to talk further about Tina at the moment?”

    “No, I don’t,” she answered very plainly.

    “I didn’t think so,” I said. “What else do want to know?”

    “What about the refusal of a grant from the Peabody Foundation for the CAC?” she asked.

    “Bette, I had nothing to do with the fact that the Foundation had decided unanimously to appropriate funds in a different direction,” I explained. “Although, I will admit to you that my heart was in favor of Social Justice appropriations.”

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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