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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    Helena started, “But…”

    I placed my forefinger on her lips. “No buts.”

    Helena reached behind me and rubbed my ass. “Not even this one?” she quipped, grinning slyly.

    “You are so bad!” I answered with a broad smile.

    “Yes, you’re mischievous and I’m bad. We are quite the pair, aren’t we?” Helena replied.

    *******************

    I took a sip of my wine.

    “Mmm. Another marvelous selection, Bette,” I complimented her.

    I watched Bette close her eyes and swallow. “It does have a nice long, smooth finish, doesn’t it?” she remarked, slowly raising her eyelids to look at me.

    Inwardly, I sighed, admiring her beauty.

    “Let’s go sit on the couch in the other room. We can relax and listen to music,” I said. “Here, will you take my glass? And I’ll follow with the appetizer, which, as you pointed out, we haven’t quite made our way through.”

    Bette stepped towards me, reaching for my glass with her hand. She leaned in for a quick kiss. And licked my lips with her tongue.

    “The wine tastes even better on you,” Bette said decisively.

    “Go sit down. I’ll be right there,” I said, rubbing her seductive behind as she passed.

    When I entered the casual living area a few minutes later, carrying the plate, I saw that Bette had made herself comfortable. Her back was nestled into the pillows at the arm of the sofa. She stared down at her wine glass and appeared to be deep in cogitation.

    Bette didn’t hear me enter the room. I startled her when I spoke. “Have I told you how beautiful you look in my bathrobe?” I asked, whimsically.

    “Thank you. No, I don’t believe you have,” she answered, looking up at me. A faint smile followed, but it was laden with perplexity.

    “A penny for your thoughts, Bette,” I said, placing the cheese and fruit on the coffee table and picking up my wine glass. I seated myself at the opposite end of the couch facing her.

    Bette raised her eyebrows.

    “A penny. I know I can afford more. It’s just an expression,” I joked.

    Bette laughed. “No, it’s just that I wasn’t expecting you to sit so far away from me,” she explained.

    “You looked as if you were contemplating something very important. I thought perhaps you’d decided there was something you wanted to talk to me about,” I said. “Sitting very near to you is not going to facilitate a conversation. Other things, yes. But not a serious discourse.”

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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