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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    She smiled. “You’re absolutely right, Helena. On every count. That’s very considerate of you actually.”

    I took a long sip of wine. And Bette followed suit.

    “So, what is it, Bette? What’s on your mind?” I asked without further delay.

    Bette took a deep, cleansing breath. I kept my eyes focused on her.

    “Helena, what is all this about? Your caring for me deeply for quite some time now? Wanting me, but being with Tina?” Bette questioned. “I’m so aroused by you, and it’s confusing me so badly. Because until just recently, I’ve perceived you as quite the nemesis.” She took another long sip of wine.

    “Oh, my God, Bette. Please, stop. This is such a mess. I am not your nemesis. I am not your enemy. Please, believe me,” I pled. I wanted to touch her, to reach out to her, but wisdom told me not to at this point. “Bette?”

    She continued to embrace her wine glass.

    “What?” she asked quietly.

    “Oh, God, this is fucking excruciating. I’ve lived in fear that you would find out how I felt about you. And, simultaneously, I’ve lived in fear that you wouldn’t reciprocate if you did find out how I felt. It just feels liberating for me that you know, whatever the outcome.”

    Bette managed to choke out a few more sentences. “When did you first see me, Helena? When did you first ‘want’ me?

    I took another long sip of wine and set my glass down on the table. I got up and sat next to her. I adjusted her robe to make sure she was adequately covered, for the moment.

    “Bette, you went to a ‘Provocations’ exhibit at the MONA in New York. Remember? Mother had told me about you beforehand. She’d called me the next morning, after you’d charmed her in her Penthouse at the Los Alemendros when she was on one of her art-buying sprees. She wanted me to meet you, saying you were one of the most enchanting women she’d ever met. At any expense, at the earliest she could arrange it, she had designed a dinner in your honor. Everyone at the museum was talking about you, about how you had single-handedly procured ‘Provocations’ from MOCA with Mother’s help.”

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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