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“No longer married? What …um … maybe some other time.”
Lena smiled. “Definitely.”
Bette cleared her throat. “But the only question that matters…”
Lena sidled over, making her way back to Bette, hips swaying from side to side. “Only one question? I’m impressed.”
She sat, taking her time doing so, and kept her eyes on Bette.
“So .. um … you must have had Jordie when you were, like 10?”
Lena laughed out loud. “That’s funny.”
Bette shrugged, then coughed again to clear her throat.
“Silly, of course I didn’t. Is that your way of saying…”
“You look like you’re sisters, yeah. I mean, you can’t have been…”
“I had her when I was 18.”
Bette’s eyebrows shot up in surprise as she did a mental calculation. “No way!” So she’s…
“Stop it. I’m 35, all right? And I’m sure I look it!”
Bette shook her head vigorously from side to side. “No, you don’t! Besides, I’m not that far from you.”
“Get out. You must be closer to Jordie’s age than mine.”
“Now you stop it.”
Lena stood and pulled her stool closer to Bette’s. “You can’t be more than 25.”
“28, and I’ve got my generation’s taste in music to prove it.”
Lena opened her mouth to say something but Jordie’s voice interrupted them, bellowing from the storage area. “Jay! Every inch of the storage area is spic and span!”
The three friends were singing something as they bounded up the stairs. “No, that was the song we used to tease Sam when Tom’s cousin started chasing her around, remember? That guy who was visiting from LA? We changed the words to disguise it when Tom was around, after his cousin left? Remember that Sam?”
Lena elbowed Bette again, raising her voice above the ruckus. “I asked you earlier and you didn’t answer me. Where’s my daughter and what have you done with her? Because the real Jordan barely picks up after herself and cleans her room up only if I bug her 20 times about it!”
Bette chuckled and turned to the three with a big smile. “You all have fun?”
Sam snorted. “That’s not what I’d call fun, boss. These two were teasing me the whole time.”
Jordie distributed folded cleaning towels from a box of cleaning supplies she’d brought up. She paused as she eyed the two women seated rather closely together. “Behave yourself with my mom, Jay.”
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Skydancer, thank you for the update.
I was certain you would bring Tina in the café to meet Bette. But maybe it is Tina and she had to change her name too and needed to hide.
Lena or Tina doesn’t matter at the,moment, Bette can use some tender loving to reliesh her stress.
Tina’s coming ;-) but she’s not Lena. Not quite sure how to pull of a TLC scene for Bette yet without the Google police making things difficult for @Jacky. Any ideas?
Nice chapter, skydancer. In some email exchanges with @Jacky, she’s passed on to me that she doesn’t expect, nor want writers to self-censor. Just write what you want and let the chips fall where they may. Gotta love that woman. I would just avoid keywords that would be caught by any sniffer. I’m sure you have an idea of what words might attract attention. Other than that, I say bring on the TLC!
*off not of
Don’t worry about the site in terms of Google. Post without hesitation. This will all work out!
Really like this so far. If not mistaken, in the first chapter, I believe that I read that a film crew would be in the area very soon. So if you didn’t change Tinas’ occupation, then that is when she will show up. Right? Must go back and read that first chapter for some clarification of all this. Thanks for sharing. Can hardly wait for Tina to appear.
Why is Google going after this site?
Hi @Jane, I was referring to warning or instructions you see when you start to post a new chapter or story. The warning is new, and informs you that Google is screening for mature content in the text, not just in pics that are posted. Since the site relies on Google providing a platform for it (I think), I took it seriously. I also took it to mean Google is screening other posted chapters (and I’ve posted a bunch of chapters with sexy scenes, so ….). But @Jacky is saying not to worry, so, I guess that means I can (?) does that clear it up for you?
Enjoyed it, thanks
Hmmm, very, very interesting. Our favorite girls having to survive in a Red State, living underground, and communicating thru code! Sort of like life right now! Again. Please keep writing so I can relive this